Stalker

romantic dinners
and walks together   but she
won't know I was there

crushfunnyfunny lovesenryu

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Susan Gentry

August 6, 2018 at 4:40 PM

Oh I like this one! Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

August 5, 2018 at 2:33 PM

Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Mark Toney

August 4, 2018 at 2:52 PM

Intruder alert! Congratulations on your win, Jesse.

Line Gauthier

August 3, 2018 at 10:53 PM

I like that your poem can be interpreted several ways. Congrats on your win, Jesse.

Andrea Dietrich

August 3, 2018 at 3:11 PM

creepy, and I LIKES it!!! Congrats.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 3, 2018 at 1:26 PM

Oh. Creepy! Awesome Senryu ;) Congrats on your win! xomo

Jesse Rowe

August 3, 2018 at 2:38 PM

Yeah, this was a take on a (joke?) I read once. "Stalking is when two people go on a long romantic walk together, but only one of them knows about it."