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Staircase

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Sponsor: Nette Onclaud, Visions of a Vignette, 6/22/2025

shadow shimmies up stairs catches my eye and ceasing its pursuit stops so I can snap its soul coiled and still

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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2025 7:02:00 AM
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- ... got a creepy feeling ... great done, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2025 4:33:00 AM
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Great one Kim! Well done :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/23/2025 2:54:00 AM
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This one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I thought about maybe using that prompt, but your competition here would have been a great one. Sara K
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/22/2025 10:53:00 PM
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Very very nice. Love how you did yours.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2025 8:19:00 PM
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Kim, very nice,best of luck in the contest ~
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2025 7:40:00 PM
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'Me and My Shadow:' Da-da-da-di-da-da-da-di-di... ~ Frank Sinatra and Sammy Davis, Jr.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2025 7:42:00 PM
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LOL!
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Paige Hind
Date: 6/22/2025 5:20:00 PM
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This is an absolute stun, Kim!! Best take for the contest I read yet! <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2025 7:42:00 PM
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I appreciate you, Paige!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/22/2025 12:19:00 PM
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I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Staircase" write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away...........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2025 7:43:00 PM
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Thank you, Paula!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/22/2025 11:42:00 AM
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I really like your take as well. Soupmail.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2025 7:43:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea!

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