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STAINLESS LOVE

Your rejection is a violent blow to the face of my affection. It stops the flow of my compasssion's blood and dries the flood of my burning passsion. But I will continue to feed this innocent attraction. I will ontinue to breed this stainless love until its muscles grow tough.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/6/2016 6:18:00 AM
Jide,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:24:00 PM
JIDE, enjoyed reading your poem... HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 4/21/2009 10:53:00 AM
Awesome poem...pls repeat 2nd stanza or need to consier it two stanza by: But I will..... whereas the comlete melody is playes solo without singing and then sing the second part...the solo melody needs to be the violin.
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:29:00 PM
Jide, another great poem! I can feel your passion in this one. Thanks for reading "Uncle Sam's Sticky Fingers." Have a nice weekend, Carolyn
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