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Stained Letters

Old letters stained by umbra of the night

Each crumpled phrase falls as ravens alight




~Juli-Michelle's Rhyme Battle: Round 6 ~

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/27/2014 6:50:00 PM

succulent and sweet Nette gl in contest hugs

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/27/2014 5:41:00 AM

You only need a word or two to leave the world stunned!

Jake Ponce

Date: 4/26/2014 10:30:00 AM

Nette, there's something about the poetry that comes from you. I can't quite pinpoint what it is yet but I sure am looking forward to our meet-up so we can zero in on what it is. Nevertheless, I'm quite sure it's an otherworldly beauty and style that is truly your own.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/25/2014 5:58:00 PM

Beautiful, Nette; as momentary judge I give you a 7 rating! I second our friend Peter:) gl. // paul

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 4/24/2014 5:23:00 AM

very beautifully crafted piece

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/23/2014 11:12:00 PM

This is a strengthened, yet slightly ominous tinge to this. Fierce!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2014 4:03:00 PM

wow, this is very good, Nette. Eerie too, just like Poe. thanks for the win. I loved the theme of your last contest.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/23/2014 2:27:00 PM

Nothing that you write is ordinary. Exquisite once again ! ps......many many thanks, Nette, for my placement in your contest, and alerting me to a editing error. Thanks so much !!

Manny Paras

Date: 4/23/2014 1:39:00 PM

To be able to complete a thought with sombre mood in just 2 lines is a remarkable feat. You raised the standard , Nette. Thank you for giving me a slot in your contest.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/23/2014 1:32:00 PM

Very vivid and captivating!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/23/2014 1:18:00 PM

Those phrases may fall, but they can take the soul to flight.....along with the ravens! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2014 12:06:00 PM

- Hey my friend Nette, the last two weeks there have been a beautiful spring weather here - P-soup does not come as first choice when spring is here - but today I will visit your beautiful poem - a pleasure to read it :) - Thanks :) - Enjoy the spring you too :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)