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STAINED GLASS STEPS

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She felt the cobblestones like braille beneath her worn boots' sigh, her shadow stretched, a thin companion, 'neath the bruised-blue sky. The spires clawed the clouds apart, stone fingers scraping light, to catch the fractured evening sun in panes of jeweled might. Her steps grew slow, a pilgrim's pace on faith-eroded ground, then silence roared – that holy hush where all lost prayers are found.
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Rene Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 6:55 PM
Good job
Poet Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:22 AM
This poetry is quite remarkable and profound. Amazing, breathtaking imagery abounds in every line of this poem.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:34 PM
Wow, Sotto! Your most generous and kind with your complimentary words. I always appreciate your comments, Texas hugs, Sara
DiMino Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 3:19 AM
Always hope...one step at a time, don't even have to be forward. Looking back can be helpful. All things can be new from a different perspective. Great poetry! Very well constructed write. Brilliant!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:34 PM
thanks, Joe, for sharing....I agree...one step at a time...rely upon faith. Thanks for your enthusiastic response.
George Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 8:51 PM
This small poem is filled with outstanding images- 'the bruised blue sky, the spires clawing the clouds apart, fractured evening sun in panes of jewelled might'..... Simply wonderful. Into my FAVE
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:33 PM
thanks for those complimentary words, Valsa, and for the FAVE...means a great deal to me.
Hind Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 5:25 PM
Beautiful poetry!! I love the "spires clawed the clouds apart"
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:32 PM
wow, thanks so much!
Gauthier Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 9:24 AM
Beautiful ~ what lovely rhythm and flow. Added to my FAVEs.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 4:49 PM
oh wow, thank you for the FAV. Appreciate your doing so.
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