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intense . . . to begin with, belayed by hours hewn soliloquy through obverse platitudes benign, betrayal among friends, in grounds of open mouths, a kraken of tongues regale upon which bar the cocktails finally arrived

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Date: 11/2/2023 4:30:00 AM
Betrayal among friends a line that strikes for me and hits strong and it resonates! Brilliant diction and flow of intriguing and heartfelt thoughts! Pleasure reading this
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/2/2023 4:49:00 AM
I appreciate your thoughts, thank you
Date: 11/1/2023 8:31:00 PM
a kraken of tongues…great!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/2/2023 1:07:00 AM
Thanks for reading, Kim
Date: 11/1/2023 2:27:00 PM
creative and intriguing poem, Clive. I liked the image of 'kraken of tongues regale.' Nicely done. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/1/2023 12:17:00 PM
Clive, your writings, Brilliantly creative!!!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/1/2023 12:42:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Mark
Date: 11/1/2023 11:55:00 AM
well composed, creative, unexpected, refreshing
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/1/2023 12:41:00 PM
Thanks Mat, your time is appreciated

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