Beautiful Scars Poet Monorhyme

Stagnant Pollution

Shards of listening sunflowers, she's trapped in the gardens reflection,
contaminated shattered seedlings was not the topiary's intention,
inside the stamen, her severed particles, causing an afflicted defection,
scraps of glass and plastic lies beneath the roots, depleting the petals complexion,
the world divides into pieces from this stagnant pollution infection.

Date Written: February 23, 2016

For The Contest, Fragment of Life, Sponsor, Broken Wings

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Sarita Milliner March 12, 2016 at 10:17 AM Congrats on you win, Laura! Beautiful Scars March 12, 2016 at 11:46 AM Thank you Sarita :)-luloo *smiles*

Charlie Smith March 9, 2016 at 8:30 AM Captured the theme. Great work and congratulations Beautiful Scars March 9, 2016 at 8:52 AM Thank you Charlie :)-luloo *Smiles*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 8, 2016 at 10:09 PM Wonderful poetry Laura.. congrats on big win. Beautiful Scars March 9, 2016 at 8:51 AM Thank you Dr. Upma :)-luloo *smiles*

Sam Jameson March 8, 2016 at 1:44 PM Nicely done-- captured the cause and effect aspects very well. Very descriptive words with flow, and able to visualize the beauty and the destruction...a job well done luloo! Congrats on your placement. Beautiful Scars March 9, 2016 at 8:50 AM Thank you Sam :)-luloo *Smiles*

Probir Gupta March 8, 2016 at 8:04 AM A realist poem. Congrats for the win... Beautiful Scars March 9, 2016 at 8:50 AM Thank you Probir:)-luloo *smiles*

Susan Gentry March 7, 2016 at 11:25 PM Congratulations on your win! A 7... Excellent take on the theme, well written. Beautiful Scars March 9, 2016 at 8:49 AM Thank you Susan :)-luloo *smiles*

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2016 at 3:28 PM The effects of pollution on this poor plant was shown very descriptively. Big congrats on your win, Laura. Beautiful Scars March 7, 2016 at 3:57 PM Thank you Andrea :)- luloo *smiles*

Eve Roper March 7, 2016 at 12:43 PM Laura, absolutely beautiful congratulations on the “Fragment Of Life” contest a 7: ) Hugs Eve Beautiful Scars March 7, 2016 at 2:13 PM Thank you for all your kind feedback Eve :)-luloo *smiles*

Jan Allison March 7, 2016 at 12:29 PM five fabulous lines LuLoo many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars March 7, 2016 at 1:31 PM Thank you lovely lady :)-luloo *smiles*

Paul Callus March 7, 2016 at 11:10 AM Very beautifully expressed, Laura! An excellent take on this proposed theme...and I like your rhyme. ~ Congratulations on this high flying win:) ~ Regards // paul Beautiful Scars March 7, 2016 at 1:31 PM Thank you Paul very much for all your kind feedback :)-luloo *Smiles*

Sandra Haight March 7, 2016 at 10:27 AM Great theme for 'fragment of life', Laura. Love your message and how well you did with difficult monorhyme you used. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars March 7, 2016 at 10:52 AM Thank you Sweet Sandra :)-luloo *Smiles*

Daniel Turner February 24, 2016 at 8:11 AM I'm with you here, Laura. I've seen so much pollution in my life. I have seen the destruction it can and is doing already, in my lifetime. Excellent poem from an excellent poet. A7 Beautiful Scars February 24, 2016 at 10:10 AM Thank you very much! Thank you for popping in and leaving lovely positive feedback. I always appreciate that :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy February 23, 2016 at 4:34 PM So true--life can become "contaminated" with stagnation! Good poem. Janice Beautiful Scars February 23, 2016 at 5:41 PM Thank you Janice:)-luloo