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Staged Dawn

Each night I leave my blinds up just a bit A distance calculated to perfection I live for those mornings where the sun rises And blares suddenly through my window Drenching and kissing my sleepy face Flooding me with a swift deluge of gold magnificence So very still, I refuse to move a fraction of an inch It’s a most overwhelming sacred and sublime ritual Opening my eyes as slowly as possibly I can And breathlessly greeting the rising morning sun Savoring each moment of its warm embrace Knowing the feverish moment is ultimately so fleeting When my eyes can feast on the splendor Of glorious colors spilling over the horizon The symmetry of crimson, tangerine Pineapple, butterscotch and daffodil The most magnificently flamboyant production Staged for my ultimate delight Till residual taste of honey and marmalade Vanish from my lips With every atom of me Profoundly invigorated and energized AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on July 17, 2018 for contest DUSK OR DAWN sponsored by EMILE PINET - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 8/6/2018 12:41:00 AM
Touched my soul. Beautiful. Congratulations.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Francesca, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/5/2018 7:55:00 PM
Congrats Line on your top win..a beautiful poem your wrote.
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Date: 8/5/2018 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/3/2018 2:29:00 AM
Unique and brilliantly composed Line! Congratulations on your wonderful third placement! : )
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/2/2018 10:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful and creative. :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2018 1:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/2/2018 8:26:00 PM
Line, a beautiful game of sunrise peek-a-boo. Vivid imagery and marmalade.....
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2018 8:30:00 PM
LOL thanks for your lovely visit and comment, John.
Date: 8/2/2018 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations Line. A lovely verse. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2018 6:22:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Tom.
Date: 8/2/2018 12:27:00 PM
YESSS. Sublime! Congratulations on your win! :) xomo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2018 6:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/2/2018 11:16:00 AM
Wonderful work Line, congratulations...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2018 6:21:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Charlie.
Date: 8/2/2018 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations Line! Your amazing poem "STAGED DAWN", has placed Third" in my PoetrySoup contest. It was a very tough contest to judge, very well done my friend, Emile.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Emile, for the much appreciated podium finish.
Date: 7/18/2018 5:40:00 AM
Beautifully written,surpassing the poetry challenge, Line. I am going to lift my blinds up a bit tomorrow.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2018 7:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. I hope the sunrise is as perfectly lined up with your bedroom window.

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