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Stable And Last

Earth is a planet
Earth is stable
Stable for eons
Stable swirling mass
Mass of gases
Mass of gold
Gold lands in rivers
Gold slips through hands
Hands develop character
Hands reach out in love
Love grows
Love holds
Holds hands
Holds hearts
Hearts melt
Hearts never part
Part ways
Part stays
Stays in spirit
Stays in mind
Mind can't forget
Mind holds on
On goes love
On goes life
Life continues somewhere
Life intertwines
Intertwines with others
Intertwines in emotions
Emotions in soul
Emotions never leave earth
Earth awaits return
Earth is groaning
Groaning for release
Groaning for Christ
Christ's return to repair
Christ's coming renews
Renews like spring
Renews like Eden
Eden perfect garden
Eden perfect life
Life on earth
Life for eons
Eons go on
Eons last
Last forever
Last into infinity
Infinity is forever
Forever
Infinity
   

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2024

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Bill Baker Date: 2/3/2024 10:06:00 PM Very creative and heartfelt poetry, Sara. The Blitz form of poetry allows the thoughts to connect in a unique way. Not everyone is able to write this way. I admire your sharing your thoughts and concerns through this form of poetry, my friend. A FAV for my list. We have hope in the Second Coming. Bill Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 2/4/2024 3:28:00 AM I am encouraged with your faving it also. Thank you, Bill. I had an uncle named Bill, but of course, long ago deceased. Sara K

Hiya Sharma Date: 2/3/2024 7:38:00 PM Oh my, what a beautiful blitz this is, dear Sara! You've truly excelled in creating a wonderful flow while choosing impeccable words that create an impact on the reader's heart.. Those lines about the Earth are so deep! "Hearts melt Hearts never part Part ways Part stays Stays in spirit Stays in mind" What a heart-touching part.. I really loved reading this.. Sending you many best wishes and light always :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 2/4/2024 3:27:00 AM Thank you, Hiya. I like the smiley face. Thanks for the best wishes. Sara K

Ink Empress Date: 2/3/2024 11:41:00 AM Wow this is stunning really. The shape flow and depth of your words truly is just soul hitting! Brilliant blitz. Youve really mastered the art of weaving blitz. I loved so many lines in this. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light always Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 2/3/2024 12:36:00 PM Thank you, IE. I appreciate the visit. I need God's Light always. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 2/3/2024 10:27:00 AM Dearest Sara, Wow, your poem beautifully captures the Blitz style essence of Earth's eternal stability and the intricate interplay of life, love, and spirituality. The repetition and progression of themes reflect the cyclical nature of existence and the enduring bond between humanity and the planet. Your poetic prowess evoke a profound sense of connection and hope for renewal. It is so reflective and thought-provoking piece that I read it twice. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 2/3/2024 12:35:00 PM Why, thank you, Daniel. Just putting down what pops into your head in Blitz sort of way is not easy and it necessarily doesn't say what you would like for it to say. I appreciate the visit. Sara K