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Paddy supped ten pints of real ale As drunk as a skunk, he turned pale He slewed to the right Got into a fight Now Paddy’s residing in jail! Luck of the Irish Limerick Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman 03~14~17

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Date: 4/13/2017 9:45:00 PM
Well deserved win on a tradition that transcends most cultures (getting drunk then getting locked up!) Congratulations Jan! :-)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/14/2017 3:18:00 AM
It's a shame but alcohol can bring the worst out in people:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thanks for this, Jan. You've let me start my week with a smile. Nicely done, congrats! Dave
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/10/2017 11:10:00 AM
Thanks David I do love writing this form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/8/2017 12:00:00 AM
It takes a lot of skill to come up with a good limerick. Fantastic. Congratulations and blessings, Janis.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/8/2017 4:20:00 AM
I just enjoy the form Janis I have learned an awful lot since I joined soup!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 8:09:00 PM
AWESOME WIN, LImerick lady!! How have you been these days??
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/8/2017 4:19:00 AM
Am fab thanks my lovely friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 5:40:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by to congratulate you on a very fine first place win Jan! hugs~Che :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 5:42:00 PM
Thanks Cheryl:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 5:09:00 PM
Jan, In Boston(when I was a younger man) the police would call for the "Paddy Wagon" on friday nights to haul off the drunken "Paddy's". So congrats on this "top of the heap" remembrance.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 5:15:00 PM
Makes me so happy I rarely drink alcohol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 4:53:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Jan! First place is well deserved:) Hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 4:56:00 PM
Thanks Paul I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 3:21:00 PM
Paddy has done you proud here, Jan. Congratulations on 1st place.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Ray:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 10:33:00 AM
Back to congratulate you Jan...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 9:49:00 AM
You are a master of limericks Jan and this one is so funny. Congrats on your win
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 1:24:00 PM
aww thanks Sara i just love the limerick form I find them so easy to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 9:05:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations Jan, so pleased you got first place with this excellent Limerick, Roy. :)))
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Roy I was absolutely delighted as I do love writing this form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 6:45:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Jan. It seems very fitting that you should win this contest.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 6:46:00 AM
I was delighted to place so well Agnes :-):-) I so enjoy writing the limerick form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 6:23:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your top win, Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Kim I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 4:44:00 AM
Hahahaha!!! Congrats Jan, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 6:35:00 AM
Cheers Teddy!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/6/2017 11:22:00 PM
Jan, congrats on your top win! Janice
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/6/2017 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent win ~*
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/7/2017 6:36:00 AM
Thanks Eve I do love the limerick form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/17/2017 8:39:00 PM
Now this explains why I saw the tooth fairy down at the local pub tonight. Poor St. Patty...lol!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/20/2017 1:13:00 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/16/2017 6:00:00 PM
Good job, Jan! Janice
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2017 7:49:00 PM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 3/16/2017 1:54:00 PM
You paint a hilarious picture, Jan! I always wonder how they manage to drink those huge amounts. Paddy will come to his senses in the cooler! Hugs /// paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2017 7:50:00 PM
I imagine the police will be pretty busy tomorrow!:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/16/2017 12:29:00 AM
For sure Paddy is not Irish... Persian maybe...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/17/2017 9:45:00 PM
Jan....You have a wonderful sense of humor. You must be a Capricorn or a Gemini or Libra or..
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2017 7:50:00 PM
He's Irish to be sure lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/15/2017 11:25:00 PM
the day is great for your witty, creative writing :-) Fantastic:-) blessings, lynn
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thanks Lynn:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/15/2017 5:36:00 PM
Very imaginative use of words, and skillfully constructed. You use good imagery and maintain a poetic flow throughout the whole piece, with a smile at the end. Emile.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thanks Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/15/2017 5:35:00 PM
Good one for the contest Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2017 7:52:00 PM
Cheers Ray!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/15/2017 5:10:00 PM
No one can't quite put the comical kick into a Limerick like you can Jan! Superb! I loved it! Happy St. Patty's! ; ) 7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2017 7:53:00 PM
Aww thanks Connie I do love this form:-) hugs jan xx
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