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10.03.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- St Patrick's Day -


  Ireland
  quite grand

  with gold
  to hold

  in green
  we seen

  beer flows
  all knows

  take in
  head spin

  drunken
  shrunken

  the mood
  some food

  happy
  chatty

  and dance
  in trance

  no dull
  a lull

  in spell
  as well

  next day
  must pray

  the soul
  black hole
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Beaufort Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 8:22 AM
Anne-Lise, green is good as you point out! Much better than being green with envy. It's wonderful to be Irish for at least one day and you make it even more fun!!
DiMino Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 4:23 AM
Yep, sounds like St. Patrick's day -- with my Irish buddies, when a young man, shared many a riotous celebration. And hangover.
Singh Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 11:34 PM
A lighthearted touristy view of Ireland and drinking good times so enchanting.
Greenhough Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:24 PM
A very good poem for Ireland. I like the ending.
Rodgers Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, What a fun whirlwind of the Irish spirit with light, lively, and full of charm! I love how the rhythm, the playfulness, and that cheeky bit of reality make it so much fun to read. It captures the heart of Ireland, both the joy and the recovery. A delightful ride! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Brotherton Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 3:05 PM
A wonderful footle my friend.
M  Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 1:35 PM
Nice one Sunshine….love the last one hehe! Debx
Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 5:34 AM
For those who are Catholic, I guess they have to go repent of their sin/s the day after. Some of the cities here in the USA will have some very special times planned on that day. I am not so sure St. Patrick would be pleased with the events that will happen. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 7:02 AM
St. Patrick is a Saint who went to Ireland and it is said he rid the island of all poisonous snakes. I don't really know since I am not of the Catholic faith. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 5:38 AM
- We don't celebrate St Patrick's Day in Norway... I don't know much about this celebration, Sara :) - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 3:04 AM
I always attend Mass at my favourite chapel: St Patrick's Chapel. A lovely place. Your footle is brilliant. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 5:41 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Victor :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Great st Patrick day footles, dear.
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 5:41 AM
- Andrea, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 10:52 AM
fab footles, well done Anne-Lise xx
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 5:40 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Jan :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 10:47 AM
What a cute little guy you've found to enhance your footles, Anne-Lise. Well done!
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 5:40 AM
- Yes, a cute green guy... but, we don't have them in Norway :) - Thank you, Lin :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 10:45 AM
Great string of footles Anne Lise, youre getting into the St Patrick's spirit. Good luck in the contest. Tom. Check soupmail.
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 5:38 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Tom :) - hugs
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