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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 1:12:00 AM

Hi Rama, it was nice hearing from you on my blog. :) I'd like to read your poems soon. LINDA

Rama Mohan
Date: 7/16/2016 1:18:00 AM

Thank you Miss. I just read a few line of your poetry, the words you chosen are like what can I say aaa... rhythmic like a breeze.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:20:00 AM

Rama, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2016 12:58:00 AM

Rama, before I forget,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2016 12:56:00 AM

Rama, well done on your questionnaire. :):):) excited to read it. SKAT

Rama Mohan
Date: 7/16/2016 1:22:00 AM

Well Nice to here from you,humbleness in your comment. Actually I wrote this poem in our mother tongue that it is also known as "Italian of the East". Our language is "Telugu" State Andhra Pradesh - Country India. I first time registered and posted my first poem in our Mother tongue version and it appears like the Question marks means entire Text, still you are encouraging style is memorable and what can I say a big Thanks to you and all.