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Squirrel

SQUIRREL twitch scurry twitch

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 3:54:00 AM

one more thing...Good night...px

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/20/2012 2:55:00 PM

We've got somany of the critters around doing exactly what you say Dave. They sure are fun to watch and your verse fun to read. Luv, Lizzie

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/17/2012 7:11:00 AM

A rather short haiku. Is it the tail or nose which twiches? Either or neither, the reader decodes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2012 6:21:00 AM

Daver, ha...now I feel like getting a broom.... Love the haiku...pd

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/16/2012 8:43:00 PM

Love it!!!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/15/2012 12:15:00 PM

Hi Daver!!! Ah, this describes very well what squirrels do.."twitch & scrurry", accompanied by electric sounds.:) As though they are in a state of spasmodic shock. Silly squirrels!! Hope all's well with you and yours, Daver!! love, Mikki

Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 6/16/2012 10:42:00 AM

whoa...two words, Daver! How many syllables' each?:) Love, Mikki

Daver Austin
Date: 6/15/2012 2:45:00 PM

As I get older my poems get shorter and shorter. Am working on a two worder. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/14/2012 1:47:00 PM

That describes them exactly..Made me think of them running across the road in the path of oncoming traffic...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/12/2012 5:59:00 PM

Ah..ah Daver, a scurrilous tail indeed.." well haiku'ed my friend..)

James Peranteau

Date: 6/12/2012 12:59:00 PM

Ah, a cute lil' write to share with Noah ! We have a grand time with our little squirrels..we even hand feed them peanuts ! Have a fantastic week my friend....much love, james

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2012 11:40:00 AM

Nicely done haiku daver. - oxox Anne-Lise