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SQUIRREL twitch scurry twitch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 7/16/2012 3:54:00 AM
one more thing...Good night...px
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Date: 6/20/2012 2:55:00 PM
We've got somany of the critters around doing exactly what you say Dave. They sure are fun to watch and your verse fun to read. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 6/17/2012 7:11:00 AM
A rather short haiku. Is it the tail or nose which twiches? Either or neither, the reader decodes.
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Date: 6/17/2012 6:21:00 AM
Daver, I feel like getting a broom.... Love the haiku...pd
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Date: 6/16/2012 8:43:00 PM
Love it!!!
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Date: 6/15/2012 12:15:00 PM
Hi Daver!!! Ah, this describes very well what squirrels do.."twitch & scrurry", accompanied by electric sounds.:) As though they are in a state of spasmodic shock. Silly squirrels!! Hope all's well with you and yours, Daver!! love, Mikki
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 6/16/2012 10:42:00 AM
whoa...two words, Daver! How many syllables' each?:) Love, Mikki
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daver austin
Date: 6/15/2012 2:45:00 PM
As I get older my poems get shorter and shorter. Am working on a two worder. Love, daver
Date: 6/14/2012 1:47:00 PM
That describes them exactly..Made me think of them running across the road in the path of oncoming traffic...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/12/2012 5:59:00 PM
Ah..ah Daver, a scurrilous tail indeed.." well haiku'ed my friend..)
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Date: 6/12/2012 12:59:00 PM
Ah, a cute lil' write to share with Noah ! We have a grand time with our little squirrels..we even hand feed them peanuts ! Have a fantastic week my friend....much love, james
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Date: 6/12/2012 11:40:00 AM
Nicely done haiku daver. - oxox Anne-Lise
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