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Squiggly Line

sexual tension running high crossing the squiggly line implied for a relationship that could be sublime somehow things get all mixed up is it that we cared too much observances that hurt when touched another poem that doesn’t rhyme skipping heartache, fast forwarding time rules that need to be more defined reassessing the way we are feelings moved into the heart awareness now is very stark if we are in the same place we need to cut right to the chase the squiggly line can be erased I don’t think we both can win looking back at where we’ve been that squiggly line was much too thin

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Date: 7/4/2009 10:31:00 PM
Interesting, sometimes that squiggly line just needs to be erased... Great write!
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