Squeezed Lemons

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lemons crushed over iced glass hot march sun, cape gooseberries drenched umbrellas into the fog of sunrise rain and march breezes bring in May bloom Written: March 6, 2022 Form: Lind30, 7-7-7-9 March In Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich HMS.COM

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Valsa George

Date: 3/7/2022 1:07:00 AM

This is an uplifting write. Crushed lemon over iced glass.... ! In march it is so warm here and crushed lemon with ice sounds so inviting ! The occasional rain and sun together bring May blossoms ! Lovely feeling, my friend !

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/6/2022 3:10:00 PM

Hello Lassad, I love the lemons. I use it in my tea. I enjoy bake goods made with lemons. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Faye Gibson

Date: 3/6/2022 11:26:00 AM

Lemons...so cool, so refreshing, brings great images to mind. Lovely.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 3/6/2022 10:50:00 AM

Sotto, this scenario is so refreshing, and engenders a bright forecast! Uplifting...ab