Jim Healey Poet Rhyme

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(Entry for the Fair and Square Humourous Patter Sayings Poetry Contest, submitted June 8, 2024.)

Square Dance Patter Sayings

Bow to the partner in the corner
Hey, this dance ain't nothin' but torture!

Heads lean left and circle to a line
Guzzle down that old moonshine!

Roll away to a half sashay
Get down on your knees and pray.

Circle round and round with the dear little thing
but for God's sakes don't let her sing!

Meet your partner and promenade
Slip a little 'shine in the lemonade!

Allemande left with your left hand
Drop him in a big box of quicksand!

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Martin Challender June 10, 2024 at 11:44 PM Well done Jim! Great ending. I think we all enjoyed this contest :) Jim Healey June 11, 2024 at 4:55 AM Hey, Martin! It was fun, wasn't it? Enjoyed your patters too. Cheers from Canada, Jim.

Suzette Richards June 10, 2024 at 10:59 PM Congratulations, Jim. That final line had me in stiches as, over the years, I had many dance partners with two left feet and that sounds like a good idea ... Best wishes, Suzette Jim Healey June 11, 2024 at 4:59 AM Thank you, Suzette and congratulations on your win. Your patters were fun to read. (To be honest, if you danced with me, you'd want to throw me in the quicksand! I am the king of two left feet!) Cheers from Canada, Jim.

Crystol Woods June 10, 2024 at 10:37 PM Yess! This is great patter, directions for the dancers to follow that would be so hilarious! I loved your poem and the energy and clever wit. Congrats on your 2nd placement!! And ty for supporting my first contest! Xoxo Crystol Woods June 11, 2024 at 6:49 AM That sounds so fun! Xo Jim Healey June 11, 2024 at 5:10 AM Thank you very much, Crystol. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The patters were fun to write. In my part of Canada (Newfoundland), we have square dancing with an Irish flair (one type of dance is called "Running the Goat") and it is always high tempo - very quick...and exhausting! Thanks again. Take care, Jim.