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Squamous Last Blurreds

(At 10:40pm on December 8, 1980, John Lennon was shot and mortally wounded on 72nd Street, New York. Given his love of outrageous wordplay, this poem imagines his stream-of- consciousness utterings as the ambulance rushes him to hospital, moments before his death.) In my life I've loved them all Brian, Ono, Victor, Paul two of us Sunday driving not arriving bigger than Christ you know it ain't easy do what you darn well pleasy one banned band for sail standing on the dock in Southampton one careful onus Henry the Ford Cortina little old lady from Pasadena like a dog without a bonus keep playing that rock and roll music, naughty girl you let your frock ride up sorry Mimi getting steamy one thing you can't hide is when you're crippled inside I'm going to Strawberry Fields nothing is real banter, see, is paramount tantamount to fantasy inkspots on the platters menlove matters Cynthia fragrant Yoko flagrant I saw her standing there day after day he silently stands the fool on the hill with the troublesome glands seeing the glint from the German bint when she rattles her jewelry she's the one with the royal mint Tom Jones, tomfoolery Alma Cogan needs a slogan Cilla Killer she's a thriller chiller I'm just a jealous guy what's it all about no reply

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Date: 4/4/2017 8:57:00 AM
Brian Ono and Yoko Eno. That. (I know about Epstein but it was that first association that stuck)
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Darren White
Date: 4/4/2017 9:17:00 AM
Yes exactly. So many associations running the same time and parallel. It made me smile and drove me nuts
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Michael Coy
Date: 4/4/2017 8:59:00 AM
There's Brian Eno, and of course Brian Epstein and Yoko Ono ... it's pretty clear now that Lennon had a "fling" with the (very gay) Epstein, and also with the actor Victor Spinetti, who appears in several Beatles films.
Date: 4/4/2017 5:23:00 AM
Every time I read this I get more out of it - so many connections <3 this Beatles fan loves your poem :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 4/4/2017 8:54:00 AM
To me, that's the test of truly good writing - if the reader gets more out of it with every visit. Thank you for the great compliment!
Date: 4/4/2017 1:39:00 AM
Very famous last words.... This is wonderful, I know a lot of Beatles songs, so I could identify most of them. And this is great, in a sort of up-tempo kinda writing style. There was something there that made me smile, but I am not sure if it was an intentional thing, so I won't tell :P
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Michael Coy
Date: 4/4/2017 8:53:00 AM
No surprise there, then ... you got all of the lyrics references. But what's the thing that made you smile?

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