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Sputnik: The Phantom Satellite

Beep beep...ker er er...err err err It can't be... The telemetry... It's Sputnik! It's still alive! I told my commander, But he originally didn't think Anything of it. No sir! It really is Sputnik! Listen to it's signal. The Commander couldn't believe What he was hearing, and witnessing altogether! He turned ghost white, It brought him to tears. Commander? Sputnik... I thought it had drifted away... forever...

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Date: 8/13/2015 10:20:00 PM
JOSEPH.. this is a powerful, well constructed write, that I enjoyed reading today! I want to WELCOME you to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. I read a lot of poems and I'm looking forward to checking out more of your works. PS.. If you have a moment, check out my poems as well. I'm looking forward to becoming friends with those who do (Iron sharpens Iron).. Talk soon, LYRIC MAN
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Date: 8/7/2015 11:55:00 PM
Joseph, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/6/2015 12:45:00 AM
Hi Joseph, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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