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Sputnik and the Moon

You found me in a shadow, By chance alone, and still. Within a hole I came to know: A burden; can't fulfill. Buried nether stories, I've welded to my spine: Biopolitic territories, Ancient ruins, un-divine. I floated in that shadow, Embracing darkness wet. Drenching moisture—catacomb— Until endured my Privyet. Flickered 'hind the window glass, Your eyes puckered in the lime, To return and pass, iconic sass, Greet, regurgitate its rhyme. You saw me saunter by. A passing pigeon cull, Lulling dull, unknown to why, My eyes, by yours, still pull. A less than pass for fancy: American tell-tale trope. Annotations, future necromancy, Proof for school: A dope. Until I knew I wasn't still. Like you, a passerby. You—the moon—light could spill, On I, an unused satellite. We're meant for darkness, Designed in light, To be without its touch. In spite of sight that drives our might, Yet without you, I don't see much.

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Date: 6/9/2023 1:59:00 PM
Brilliant poetry. Your are quite unique an very interesting too. Great poetry, dark and in depth imagery. Very unique , definitely a fav for me...
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B. Joseph Fitzsimons
Date: 6/9/2023 6:47:00 PM
Wow that’s very kind Robert, I have definitely read a few of your works as well in the past and think I even favorited one of them, I’ll have to re-explore. Thanks for making my night :)
Date: 5/20/2022 12:11:00 PM
I had to read this poem over and over again because it is so beautiful. I love the line "We're meant for darkness, Designed by light".
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B. Joseph Fitzsimons
Date: 5/20/2022 1:24:00 PM
Wow, thank you Joy! That really means a lot. I can't wait to explore your work as well :)

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