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God sent his Son, so long ago, To take away all sin and woe. But many hearts were closed in sin, The Holy Gift could not get in. Thus we still have unholy wars, The greed and shame our God abhors. He sent His Son to bring us love, Fresh from the Heavens up above. Those who have listened to His plea Are from their sin forever free. Love was the message that he brought, Love for all men the lesson taught. He weeps for those who turn away, And longs for them unto this day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/19/2016 2:55:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Joyce. An even more beautiful message of love. Touche. Poetic perfection, at least to me. Love always, my fine poetic friend.
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Date: 5/5/2012 12:01:00 AM
big cheers for a piece so well done, joyce!.. congrats with love and huggs! :)
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Date: 5/4/2012 11:23:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your win in Brian's contest.Loved it first time around.
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Date: 5/4/2012 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 174" Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2012 6:33:00 AM
very well said...congrats on your win Joyce
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Date: 5/3/2012 9:21:00 AM
i love religion and all the phylisophical questions that arise with it. this is an excellent poem but it always begs the question why create sin then have your son come down to wash it away not to sound to down but i think we only exsist to test christ and once hes obtained perfection by helping us we will be tossed aside or worse well just a thought your poem inspired peace
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Date: 5/3/2012 12:04:00 AM
Good message here Joyce.Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 5/2/2012 9:23:00 PM
so true, Joyce and a necessary message!!!
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:10:00 PM
Joyce, this fills me up with joy... the wonderful message ... holds my faith these days. enjoyed... .. have yourself a very wonderful day ;-) LINDA
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Date: 5/2/2012 7:40:00 PM
WOW!!! Superb write,very touching...... Elliott .....
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Date: 5/2/2012 6:28:00 PM
they wear the ever lasting chains and cannot see. there fore lost to heaven to that degree. we hope earth is hell for which they will never escape. but as for theirs souls, it is too late.
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 5/2/2012 6:41:00 PM
In God all things are possible, John I hope my message doesn't say otherwise

Book: Shattered Sighs