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Spud's Night Out

A young potato put his jacket on, Going out for some dance and song, All the girls hearts skipped a beat Upon seeing Spud and his dancing feet, He got mashed when he danced too long.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 3/27/2015 2:18:00 AM
G'day John... oh well John, some spuds get mashed, others get baked, and some turn into chips, but we all adore them. Thanks mate - Lindsay
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john williams
Date: 3/27/2015 3:17:00 AM
Hello Lindsay, Thank you for reading my poem. I just couldn't work bake and chip into the setting, although it would've been good to do so. Your comment has made me feel quite chipper. Kind regards---John
Date: 3/26/2015 2:49:00 AM
Ha, Ha, Ha, LOL, Brilliant write John Best wishes Kevin
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Date: 3/26/2015 3:21:00 AM
I'm so glad it gave you laugh Kevin. Thanh you for reading my poem. Kind regards----John