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Sprinkling Relief

That blurry mirage of sizzling heat As the trucks passed by, steam rose from concrete Irvington couldn’t build a swimming pool But came up with a way to keep kids cool How I begged my mother to make the walk For three hours of laughs and silly talk At noon kids gathered in a cement pit Sprinklers turned on, we enjoyed each minute Refreshed, we passed beach balls or we played tag But mostly we just ran a jig-and-jag The park had swings, slides and arts and crafts too But at sprinkler time, none of these would do In the years before air conditioning Torrid rays of sun we kids were shunning Inner city children escaping heat This was our favorite summer retreat Moms, kids in swimsuits till showers ended Ice pops passed out to the towel-tended On weekends Dad drove us to the seashore But sprinkler days with Mom I remember more *For the “Hot Time, Summer in the City” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/1/2013 5:53:00 AM
This is one cool write that warms my Heart dear Carolyn, I'll never forget you As being supportive to me when I came To this site i can see your Mother did Great in those important early years, & Didn't It pay off for us here at "the soup" kind thoughts to you Joe..)
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Date: 6/14/2012 11:02:00 AM
Childhood memories like this can be so sweet..especially if they are exciting. Hope all is well with you Carolyn. ~always&forever Lynette
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:41:00 AM
Ah yes, those fun days of old! I remember the sprinkler days! We were country kids so there wasn't a concrete area full of sprinklers in a park for us! But we made our own sprinkler fun. We got Dad's special garden sprinkler and set it up in the yard, turned it on, and my brother and I ran through it for hours! That was fun on those hot summer days! I really enjoyed your fantastic write as it brought back memories of the past! You bring up emotions with your clever poems...I love that!Great Work
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:23:00 AM
Those were the days. We found our own fun, our own games, and made our own good times. Technology has taken so much of that away along with removing imagination and ingenuity.
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