Springtime's Debut

The trilling birds are on the wing.
	The blooms are lovely; skies are blue.
	The breeze exudes a unique zing.
	Springtime has made its grand debut.

        The young and young-at-heart will sing
	of love, and some will say “I do.”
	It’s here—sweet, long-awaited spring.
	The season’s grandeur, now pursue.


February 19, 2018, entered in Brian Strand's Standard Contest 70
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 7:27 PM
How joyous and bright, Janice, and so enriching! I feel better now I've read it - an injection of sunshine and hope! Blessings and congrats, friend! :-) <3
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February 27, 2018 at 7:39 PM
Thank you so much Greg! Janice
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February 22, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Congrats on your win, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Thank you so much, Line! Janice
Grasso Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 9:01 PM
Beautiful poem, Janice. Congratulations! ...Fran
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Thank you so much, Francis! Janice
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February 22, 2018 at 8:41 PM
The season of love! A nice Spring poem, Janice! Congrats!
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Janice
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February 22, 2018 at 7:44 PM
I am not looking forward to this season. Sorry. This is a lovely entry about a lovely time. Congratulations namesake.
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Thank you so much, Janis. I have seasonal allergies, but I just look at all the lovely blooms through my bleary eyes while popping allergy pills and sneezing! Actually, fall is my favorite season. Janice
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February 22, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Janice, congrats for your win for this lovely poem. We all await the arrival of spring. John
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Thank you so much, John! Janice
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February 20, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Very uplifting thoughts of spring..a rhythmic creation..best for a win, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 6:23 AM
What a lovely poem..
Canerdy Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so much, S.O.! Janice
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