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Springtime Dawns

Springtime dawns Springtime dawns just beyond the screen door, across the porch Dew swept lawn, emerald weave shimmering moisture collecting foot prints strolling towards an arched entryway gingerbread trimmed, covered in jasmine alive with rainbow flutters, prismatic butterfly wings partaking of nature’s pure nectar Beneath it a flagstone walkway abstract stones assorted shapes and patterns meandering through lavender and hollyhock, daisies and tulips and upon it you and me hand in hand watching the sunrise wash the sky in floral hued quivers as we welcome another beautiful day of love Good morning Soupers

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Tim Smith

Date: 5/10/2017 1:24:00 PM

Missed your good morning...had a hard time with the site earlier...I think updates

Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Tim. I've been having a few problems too but hopefully they are cleared up now.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/10/2017 1:22:00 PM

-- smile --

Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 1:25:00 PM

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/10/2017 1:09:00 PM

Hi Chris. This is lovely tranquil beautiful tender and more. All of it. Allow me to say your chosen words always match your moment in time perfectly that radiates to the reader. Wonderful entirety. Hope your day is going well.

Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 1:17:00 PM

Thank you so very much Lisa. I am happy you enjoyed your visit to my poetry. My day is going as good as a work day can. :) Here's hoping yours is beautiful as well

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/10/2017 12:16:00 PM

Good morning a Chris, What a beautiful and delightful morning you have penned for us today. It is filled with awe, love and amazing imagery. Who wouldn't have a" good" morning after viewing this? A without seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 1:16:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend for all the kind and encouraging comments you leave for me. I appreciate all that you do Alexis.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/10/2017 10:05:00 AM

Good morning Chris :) It is a joy to read this beautiful image you have painted with your words. It brings some light to this overcast, cloudy day !!

Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 10:21:00 AM

Thank you Lenna so very much. It is like that here today as well, I was hoping the poem would entice the sun to come out, but that hasn't happened yet. Wait a minute, here it comes...I think it was your wonderful comment that made it shine. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/10/2017 8:24:00 AM

This sure portrays a beautiful day with love. I found descriptions of my walkway and porch in this too. Beautiful to read this morning Chris. :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 9:57:00 AM

That's really cool Heidi, I ma happy you could relate to this. Thank you for your kindness my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/10/2017 7:52:00 AM

My friend, Chris although spring has arrived in Greece for some time and my flowers are in bloom it is just by reading your wonderful poem that I felt the breeze of spring's beauty! A 7!

Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios, that is such a nice thing to say. I am happy you enjoyed this one.