Springtime

O the spring!
What a beautiful story
In the vassal forests,
In the black eyes
From Lucille, from Camille,
What a beautiful story
On the trails
From Montana, ,
O the spring!
Could I love
Susan or Marion?
What a beautiful story
About reviewing
Flower the primroses.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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May Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 11:06 AM
A beautiful story of renewal
Anaya Avatar
January 20, 2026 at 4:14 PM
Flowers remind me of Spring, it does make for a beautiful story. Lovely poetry. Xhugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 10:28 PM
lovely...we, like flowers, carry our own special name
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2026 at 12:50 PM
Creative work. I don't think I have ever had any luck with primrose. I will have to look at that flower once again. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 11:35 AM
Your "Springtime" is a lovely read. I love pink roses the best. Have a lovely day writing away.................
Rodrigues Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 10:33 AM
Always delighted to read! A Joy like skipping through the trails of beauty! God bless!
Hind Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 8:58 PM
Nice!! Good to see your work :)
Rolland Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 4:34 PM
thanks paige, good to see you here
Brotherton Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 4:48 PM
A wonderful poem, my friend. I'm not sure people would go for a rose named Jerry. Haha.
Rolland Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 4:34 PM
thanks for supporting jerry
Rose  Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 6:20 PM
Oh spring I couldn't love you any better !
Rolland Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 4:35 PM
thanks rose
Poet Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 4:33 AM
Every flower carries a name that whispers of femininity, its allure undeniable, drawing us in with a gentle promise of beauty. A poem that dances with beauty, Yann.
Rolland Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 4:35 PM
thank you so much for the nice comment
Buhagiar Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 1:31 AM
All flowers seem to have female names and are always enticing. Lovely poem.
Rolland Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 4:36 PM
thanks victor
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 10:50 PM
You could use so many beautiful girl names for flowers. Not so much men's names!
Rolland Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 4:36 PM
nice and supporting comment, enjoyed
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