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Springs That Once Blossomed

Tiptoeing fond emotions how playfully you tease
Titillating seductively my memories to appease
Springs that once blossomed passionate appeal
When indulgent eyes met contours of your zeal
Tantalizing tenor of love quixotic rhythms reveal.

I hear those melodies, romantic heartbeats revive,
Pulsing strings of heart on its tempo they thrive
Promising forgotten vibes, fervid past is still alive
When gently you arrive awakening frozen dreams
Delighting love-beats, crooning amorous themes.

You sense as I do, why unsated feelings still woo,
Why the un-bloomed seasons are trying to renew
Autumns full of gilded hues you once withdrew
Disheartening two ardent souls beholden and true;
As love now rustles anew, what am I to construe?

Oh! how ebulliently you bloomed in our first kiss
When blazing impulses tolled moments of bliss,
I recognize those footprints as delicately you spree
In courtyard of longings, venerating you and me,
As whispers of intimacy implore in euphoric plea.

July 18, 2021
Poem of the day on July 19, 2021
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Rhymed Contest

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2021

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Valsa George Date: 1/6/2022 8:08:00 AM Beautifully penned ! The feelings of passion expressed in many of your poems are the same, but how differently you construct them and how varied are the images used ! Masterful composition ! Login to Reply

Smita Kulkarni Date: 8/16/2021 10:56:00 AM Your poem has a beautiful rhythm which helps visualize the slowly blossoming romance Vijay! Superbly written!! Login to Reply

Barbara Peckham Date: 8/13/2021 7:07:00 PM You are very talented. This is a very well-written poem in classical form. The longings, the memories, the hope come through beautifully. The first two lines set the tone, and it is followed through perfectly. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/14/2021 5:15:00 AM Thank you Barbara. Much appreciate.

Nancy Kaufman Date: 8/9/2021 2:48:00 PM this is quite classical and the imagery is beautiful. Congratulations on potd. Nancy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2021 5:59:00 AM So very kind of you Nancy. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Christuraj Alex Date: 8/2/2021 7:31:00 PM In courtyard of longings, venerating you and me, As whispers of intimacy implore in euphoric plea. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2021 5:59:00 AM Thank you Christuraj. Much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/27/2021 3:31:00 PM This beauty is astounding Vijay! Belated congratulations on your very deserving POTD honor. I am taking a poetry break because of my losses right now. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/28/2021 5:23:00 AM My thoughts reach out to you my friend. Many thanks for stopping by Connie. Always a joy to hear from you. Please take your time. I am praying time will heal.

Alexis Y. Date: 7/22/2021 7:25:00 AM WoW! Vijay, This is so romantic ,beautiful, poetic and well written. Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on a well deserved poem of the day. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/22/2021 1:40:00 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Alexis.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2021 2:19:00 PM - Beautiful as always :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Vijay ... better late than never :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/21/2021 3:57:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/20/2021 4:47:00 PM I was looking at Milt's name before I came here and I got mixed up at first, thinking Milt wrote this one!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/21/2021 5:30:00 AM Glad you found me. Much appreciate Andrea. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/20/2021 4:46:00 PM wow, gorgeous writing here, Vijay!! Great descriptive words and I also see POTD. Big congrats for that. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/21/2021 5:30:00 AM Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Heidi Sands Date: 7/20/2021 1:49:00 PM I missed this treasure and POTD! Excellent poem Vijay! So well expressed. A FAVE :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/21/2021 5:29:00 AM You are always missed when I don't see your poems or don't see in this space--but I know, you are busy with your many artistic endeavors. Much appreciate your support, Heidi. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Many many thanks.

Mike Gentile Date: 7/20/2021 8:30:00 AM Back with big congrats for POTD!! Well Done! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/20/2021 10:40:00 AM Thank you mike for your return visit. Much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/20/2021 7:25:00 AM As love now rustles anew, how beautiful the expression. May your heart, your thoughts, and your spirit, rustle every day to create more of this wonderful poetry. Have a blessed day dear Vijay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/20/2021 10:39:00 AM Thank you Vienna. Much appreciate your support.

L Milton Hankins Date: 7/19/2021 6:01:00 PM A lovely piece of writing, Vijay. Congratulations on your POTD! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/20/2021 5:48:00 AM Much appreciate Milton--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/19/2021 4:40:00 PM Congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/20/2021 5:47:00 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/19/2021 4:12:00 PM Back to congratulate you on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/20/2021 5:47:00 AM Thank you Gina for your return visit. Much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole Date: 7/19/2021 11:47:00 AM Such beautiful "emotions and moments of true love" To have someone special in your life, sharing a lifetime together-- it is precious indeed. Your words caress softly around me and my heart. I am a little late in reading this tender poem from your pen, but the wait was well worth it. Your words are now in the spotlight. Congratulations Vijay, on receiving Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/20/2021 5:47:00 AM Always a joy to read your feedback my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy. Many many thanks.

Warren Doll Date: 7/19/2021 10:55:00 AM Vijay, a fantastic rhyme. Congratulations on POTD. All the best~ Warren Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/19/2021 11:16:00 AM So very kind of you Warren. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

John Watt Date: 7/19/2021 10:21:00 AM Vijay, many wondrous images of longing and romantic memories. Really enjoyed reading this, congrats on your POTD selection ~ John Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/19/2021 11:15:00 AM Much appreciate John. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/19/2021 10:06:00 AM Special imagery my friend. Blessings Richard. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/19/2021 11:15:00 AM Thank you Richard. Much appreciate, as always. Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/19/2021 10:07:00 AM I see after reading comments that this is PoTD Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2021 9:54:00 AM - An impressive poem, Vijay - Congratulations on p.o.t.d. ... and certainly a winning poem in the contest as well :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/19/2021 11:14:00 AM Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Anne-Lise. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/19/2021 9:20:00 AM In courtyard of longings, Beautiful. Congratulations. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/19/2021 11:13:00 AM Thank you Christuraj for your visit and comments. Much appreciate.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/19/2021 9:13:00 AM Congratulations on POTD win. A beautiful story/write. Have blessed day with your win.................... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/19/2021 11:11:00 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Paula. Many thanks.

Joseph May Date: 7/19/2021 8:46:00 AM Beautifully penned Vijay, Congrats on POTD Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/19/2021 11:11:00 AM Much appreciate Joseph. Many thanks.

Eve Roper Date: 7/19/2021 8:39:00 AM Beautiful like always, Vijay, congratulations on POTD and good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/19/2021 11:10:00 AM So nice to hear--especially from you, Eve. Much appreciate. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

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