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Springs That Once Blossomed

Tiptoeing fond emotions how playfully you tease Titillating seductively my memories to appease Springs that once blossomed passionate appeal When indulgent eyes met contours of your zeal Tantalizing tenor of love quixotic rhythms reveal. I hear those melodies, romantic heartbeats revive, Pulsing strings of heart on its tempo they thrive Promising forgotten vibes, fervid past is still alive When gently you arrive awakening frozen dreams Delighting love-beats, crooning amorous themes. You sense as I do, why unsated feelings still woo, Why the un-bloomed seasons are trying to renew Autumns full of gilded hues you once withdrew Disheartening two ardent souls beholden and true; As love now rustles anew, what am I to construe? Oh! how ebulliently you bloomed in our first kiss When blazing impulses tolled moments of bliss, I recognize those footprints as delicately you spree In courtyard of longings, venerating you and me, As whispers of intimacy implore in euphoric plea. July 18, 2021 Poem of the day on July 19, 2021 Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Rhymed Contest

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Valsa George

Date: 1/6/2022 8:08:00 AM

Beautifully penned ! The feelings of passion expressed in many of your poems are the same, but how differently you construct them and how varied are the images used ! Masterful composition !

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 8/16/2021 10:56:00 AM

Your poem has a beautiful rhythm which helps visualize the slowly blossoming romance Vijay! Superbly written!!

Barbara Peckham

Date: 8/13/2021 7:07:00 PM

You are very talented. This is a very well-written poem in classical form. The longings, the memories, the hope come through beautifully. The first two lines set the tone, and it is followed through perfectly.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/14/2021 5:15:00 AM

Thank you Barbara. Much appreciate.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 8/9/2021 2:48:00 PM

this is quite classical and the imagery is beautiful. Congratulations on potd. Nancy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2021 5:59:00 AM

So very kind of you Nancy. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/2/2021 7:31:00 PM

In courtyard of longings, venerating you and me, As whispers of intimacy implore in euphoric plea. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2021 5:59:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj. Much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/27/2021 3:31:00 PM

This beauty is astounding Vijay! Belated congratulations on your very deserving POTD honor. I am taking a poetry break because of my losses right now. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/28/2021 5:23:00 AM

My thoughts reach out to you my friend. Many thanks for stopping by Connie. Always a joy to hear from you. Please take your time. I am praying time will heal.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/22/2021 7:25:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, This is so romantic ,beautiful, poetic and well written. Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on a well deserved poem of the day. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/22/2021 1:40:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Alexis.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/21/2021 2:19:00 PM

- Beautiful as always :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Vijay ... better late than never :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/21/2021 3:57:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2021 4:47:00 PM

I was looking at Milt's name before I came here and I got mixed up at first, thinking Milt wrote this one!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/21/2021 5:30:00 AM

Glad you found me. Much appreciate Andrea. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2021 4:46:00 PM

wow, gorgeous writing here, Vijay!! Great descriptive words and I also see POTD. Big congrats for that.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/21/2021 5:30:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/20/2021 1:49:00 PM

I missed this treasure and POTD! Excellent poem Vijay! So well expressed. A FAVE :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/21/2021 5:29:00 AM

You are always missed when I don't see your poems or don't see in this space--but I know, you are busy with your many artistic endeavors. Much appreciate your support, Heidi. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Many many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/20/2021 8:30:00 AM

Back with big congrats for POTD!! Well Done!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2021 10:40:00 AM

Thank you mike for your return visit. Much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/20/2021 7:25:00 AM

As love now rustles anew, how beautiful the expression. May your heart, your thoughts, and your spirit, rustle every day to create more of this wonderful poetry. Have a blessed day dear Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2021 10:39:00 AM

Thank you Vienna. Much appreciate your support.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/19/2021 6:01:00 PM

A lovely piece of writing, Vijay. Congratulations on your POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2021 5:48:00 AM

Much appreciate Milton--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2021 4:40:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2021 5:47:00 AM

Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/19/2021 4:12:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2021 5:47:00 AM

Thank you Gina for your return visit. Much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/19/2021 11:47:00 AM

Such beautiful "emotions and moments of true love" To have someone special in your life, sharing a lifetime together-- it is precious indeed. Your words caress softly around me and my heart. I am a little late in reading this tender poem from your pen, but the wait was well worth it. Your words are now in the spotlight. Congratulations Vijay, on receiving Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2021 5:47:00 AM

Always a joy to read your feedback my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy. Many many thanks.