Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Springs That Once Blossomed

Tiptoeing fond emotions how playfully you tease
Titillating seductively my memories to appease
Springs that once blossomed passionate appeal
When indulgent eyes met contours of your zeal
Tantalizing tenor of love quixotic rhythms reveal.

I hear those melodies, romantic heartbeats revive,
Pulsing strings of heart on its tempo they thrive
Promising forgotten vibes, fervid past is still alive
When gently you arrive awakening frozen dreams
Delighting love-beats, crooning amorous themes.

You sense as I do, why unsated feelings still woo,
Why the un-bloomed seasons are trying to renew
Autumns full of gilded hues you once withdrew
Disheartening two ardent souls beholden and true;
As love now rustles anew, what am I to construe?

Oh! how ebulliently you bloomed in our first kiss
When blazing impulses tolled moments of bliss,
I recognize those footprints as delicately you spree
In courtyard of longings, venerating you and me,
As whispers of intimacy implore in euphoric plea.

July 18, 2021
Poem of the day on July 19, 2021
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Rhymed Contest

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Valsa George January 6, 2022 at 8:08 AM Beautifully penned ! The feelings of passion expressed in many of your poems are the same, but how differently you construct them and how varied are the images used ! Masterful composition !

Smita Kulkarni August 16, 2021 at 10:56 AM Your poem has a beautiful rhythm which helps visualize the slowly blossoming romance Vijay! Superbly written!!

Barbara Peckham August 13, 2021 at 7:07 PM You are very talented. This is a very well-written poem in classical form. The longings, the memories, the hope come through beautifully. The first two lines set the tone, and it is followed through perfectly. Vijay Pandit August 14, 2021 at 5:15 AM Thank you Barbara. Much appreciate.

Nancy Kaufman August 9, 2021 at 2:48 PM this is quite classical and the imagery is beautiful. Congratulations on potd. Nancy Vijay Pandit August 10, 2021 at 5:59 AM So very kind of you Nancy. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Christuraj Alex August 2, 2021 at 7:31 PM In courtyard of longings, venerating you and me, As whispers of intimacy implore in euphoric plea. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win! Vijay Pandit August 10, 2021 at 5:59 AM Thank you Christuraj. Much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong July 27, 2021 at 3:31 PM This beauty is astounding Vijay! Belated congratulations on your very deserving POTD honor. I am taking a poetry break because of my losses right now. Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit July 28, 2021 at 5:23 AM My thoughts reach out to you my friend. Many thanks for stopping by Connie. Always a joy to hear from you. Please take your time. I am praying time will heal.

Alexis Y. July 22, 2021 at 7:25 AM WoW! Vijay, This is so romantic ,beautiful, poetic and well written. Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on a well deserved poem of the day. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit July 22, 2021 at 1:40 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Alexis.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2021 at 2:19 PM - Beautiful as always :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Vijay ... better late than never :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 3:57 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2021 at 4:47 PM I was looking at Milt's name before I came here and I got mixed up at first, thinking Milt wrote this one!! Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 5:30 AM Glad you found me. Much appreciate Andrea. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2021 at 4:46 PM wow, gorgeous writing here, Vijay!! Great descriptive words and I also see POTD. Big congrats for that. Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 5:30 AM Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Heidi Sands July 20, 2021 at 1:49 PM I missed this treasure and POTD! Excellent poem Vijay! So well expressed. A FAVE :) Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 5:29 AM You are always missed when I don't see your poems or don't see in this space--but I know, you are busy with your many artistic endeavors. Much appreciate your support, Heidi. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Many many thanks.

Mike Gentile July 20, 2021 at 8:30 AM Back with big congrats for POTD!! Well Done! Vijay Pandit July 20, 2021 at 10:40 AM Thank you mike for your return visit. Much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose July 20, 2021 at 7:25 AM As love now rustles anew, how beautiful the expression. May your heart, your thoughts, and your spirit, rustle every day to create more of this wonderful poetry. Have a blessed day dear Vijay :) Vijay Pandit July 20, 2021 at 10:39 AM Thank you Vienna. Much appreciate your support.

L Milton Hankins July 19, 2021 at 6:01 PM A lovely piece of writing, Vijay. Congratulations on your POTD! Vijay Pandit July 20, 2021 at 5:48 AM Much appreciate Milton--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues July 19, 2021 at 4:40 PM Congratulations on POTD! Vijay Pandit July 20, 2021 at 5:47 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Regina Mcintosh July 19, 2021 at 4:12 PM Back to congratulate you on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina Vijay Pandit July 20, 2021 at 5:47 AM Thank you Gina for your return visit. Much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole July 19, 2021 at 11:47 AM Such beautiful "emotions and moments of true love" To have someone special in your life, sharing a lifetime together-- it is precious indeed. Your words caress softly around me and my heart. I am a little late in reading this tender poem from your pen, but the wait was well worth it. Your words are now in the spotlight. Congratulations Vijay, on receiving Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit July 20, 2021 at 5:47 AM Always a joy to read your feedback my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy. Many many thanks.

Warren Doll July 19, 2021 at 10:55 AM Vijay, a fantastic rhyme. Congratulations on POTD. All the best~ Warren Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 11:16 AM So very kind of you Warren. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

John Watt July 19, 2021 at 10:21 AM Vijay, many wondrous images of longing and romantic memories. Really enjoyed reading this, congrats on your POTD selection ~ John Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 11:15 AM Much appreciate John. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2021 at 10:06 AM Special imagery my friend. Blessings Richard. Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 11:15 AM Thank you Richard. Much appreciate, as always. Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2021 at 10:07 AM I see after reading comments that this is PoTD Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 19, 2021 at 9:54 AM - An impressive poem, Vijay - Congratulations on p.o.t.d. ... and certainly a winning poem in the contest as well :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 11:14 AM Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Anne-Lise. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Christuraj Alex July 19, 2021 at 9:20 AM In courtyard of longings, Beautiful. Congratulations. Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 11:13 AM Thank you Christuraj for your visit and comments. Much appreciate.

Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2021 at 9:13 AM Congratulations on POTD win. A beautiful story/write. Have blessed day with your win.................... Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 11:11 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Paula. Many thanks.

Joseph May July 19, 2021 at 8:46 AM Beautifully penned Vijay, Congrats on POTD Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 11:11 AM Much appreciate Joseph. Many thanks.

Eve Roper July 19, 2021 at 8:39 AM Beautiful like always, Vijay, congratulations on POTD and good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 11:10 AM So nice to hear--especially from you, Eve. Much appreciate. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

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