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On a sunny spring day the songbirds sing sweet songs while the wildflowers bloom. And pink apple blossoms, release a sweet perfume. On a sunny spring day the air smells fresh and clean, like a tropical breeze. And green inks every scene, even the tops of trees. On a sunny spring day Dandelion seeds spread ubiquitous flowers. And yellow dapples lawns, drenched by April showers. On a sunny spring day, a robin redbreast builds a nest of straw and earth. And all Nature's creatures, celebrate Spring's rebirth.

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Date: 2/24/2024 3:16:00 PM
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/25/2024 6:46:00 AM
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Date: 2/23/2024 9:46:00 PM
Ahh, true rhyme! Sweet, sublime :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2024 8:55:00 AM
Thanks, Michelle, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/17/2023 6:33:00 PM
Hi Emile: Very interesting form. You have made it look easy but I am sure it isn’t LOL SuZ
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2023 7:04:00 AM
Thanks, Suzanne, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/1/2022 1:34:00 AM
Emile, you made this form burst with spring’s effervescence. There is light in every line. Just lovely! I will have to try this form one day. Bravo! xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/1/2022 8:40:00 PM
Thanks, Connie, it is so good to hear from you; I hope all is well with you my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/30/2022 4:28:00 PM
Good work in this one. I enjoyed reading it. I have written one of these. I have forgotten the how to's already. Short memory now adays. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/31/2022 7:58:00 AM
Thanks, Sara; as always I appreciate your comments. I loved your poem, keep writing my friend, Emile.

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