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Spring's Masterpiece

The artist, Spring, has painted many hours On easel earth, creating lovely flowers Strawberry blossoms giggle, ‘look at me’ As each is a masterpiece nominee Look at me? But there’s not enough time To admire each showpiece so sublime The strawberry plant, slightly a still life Yet full of life, that seamlessly grows rife We rejoice in those wee little blossoms Will they be surpassed with fruit so awesome? In the hoped-for painting upcoming Yet pre-judgement is unbecoming There’s no denying what Spring has created And ‘Look at me’, never gets dated We’re very grateful that we visited This masterpiece Spring has exhibited May 13, 2023 Couplet Poetry Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet

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Date: 10/29/2023 6:32:00 PM
A very creative write which captures some of the masterpieces of Spring.
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Date: 6/16/2023 7:01:00 PM
Lovely, sweet poem that evokes images of Spring's delights. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your win. :-)
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Date: 5/20/2023 11:29:00 AM
I see below that your entry was in fact a winner! Congratulation on the win! Bill
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Date: 5/20/2023 11:28:00 AM
Had to FAV this one, David. Well written and a lovely rendition of Spring's Masterpierce. Should do well in the contest, good luck! I'll be following your poetry and hope we can develope a friendship along the way. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/18/2023 10:59:00 AM
- Wonderful words to read, David ... congratulations on your win :) -
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Date: 5/17/2023 6:02:00 PM
David, Your writing is excellent and descriptive. Your winning couplet in my contest deserves earnest acclaim. Congratulations on your win. And thanks for your comment on my page
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Date: 5/16/2023 10:34:00 PM
Hi David, You have composed a well-written write on my favorite season of the year. Well done. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/13/2023 5:56:00 AM
Sprlng certainly does paint in the most beautiful hues, both pastel and bold. Nice line to portray earth as her easel.
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