Kim Merryman Poet Shadorma

Spring's Awakening

Sparrow song
wafts through morning air
melodic
wake-up call
as spring appears and winter
reluctantly fades.

Earth reborn
in splendid array
vibrant hues
replacing
winter's gown of white and gray -
spring's coronation.

4/2/15
Form is called "Shadorma"

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Brian Strand June 18, 2015 at 1:58 PM Thanks Kim for your kind comments and interest in my tristich.Rgds Brian Kim Merryman June 18, 2015 at 8:20 PM You are quite welcome, Brian!

Constance La France June 7, 2015 at 6:48 PM Kim, this is so beautiful and wonderful, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, for rent Kim Merryman June 7, 2015 at 7:59 PM Thank you for your encouraging comments, Constance! I hope kitty is doing better.

Jan Allison June 7, 2015 at 11:05 AM what a beautiful form and poem Kim you should use this form for a contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 Kim Merryman June 7, 2015 at 7:58 PM Thank you, Jan! I'm glad you like it. Actually I have used this form in a contest before in 2012. I didn't realize it had been that long ago! I'll have to do another one.