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Angular sunlight danced on the placid waters of the steel-gray lake. Those waters damned up upon picturesque farm are for cattle and their plentiful young calves to drink. Not only one such farm along our route to a restaurant where we'll eat a late lunch. We passed through countryside dotted with multi-shaded green trees in early leaf, shrubs in the same stage of development, and flowers in bud or bloom. The dogwoods are nearly in full blossom, redbuds lovely lavender, only outdone by the peach orchards in full bloom, in spots white iris lovely, delicate petals reach for every ray of spring's sunbeams. Small garden plots ploughed for years, maybe even centuries still exist on some of these farms. deep furrows in spring's garden.... my love for you All along the way sometimes with every few yards, maybe then a few miles, there is something new to see revealing the good earth once again coming alive. Much more precious is the beauty which God has given to man since our captivity in our homes because of the highly contagious virus. How blessed am I to have a nice view from my kitchen window which opens doors to life in a different form. engine housing on porch ceiling fan.... mud dabbing birds nest I will be able to enjoy this bird family all spring and into summer as they care for the eggs, then the young, and then see the fledglings leave an empty nest. Now the male stays close only leaving to get food. He will be on a limb on the ground from the last storm, then on the birdbath, or a little farther away on the fence with a bug in his beak. spider lilies grow rain lilies' leaves emerge.... candle moth seeks light At the end of a lovely spring day.
Contest: Springtime Haibun Sponsor: M.L. Kiser Date Written: 03/31/2021

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Date: 4/7/2021 5:55:00 PM
You paint such a beautiful picture here Sara. Reminds me of the Northwest Territories here in Canada where we used to live for 13yrs. I could see the tundra from my kitchen window and loved it. Lovely Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/8/2021 2:05:00 AM
Judy, You will have to soup mail me and tell me about the climate in the area where you once lived. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 4/5/2021 6:43:00 PM
Stunning sets of Haibun! Congratulations Sara in your awesome win!
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Date: 4/6/2021 5:07:00 AM
JCB, Thanks for the visit with congrats. Sara
Date: 4/2/2021 10:20:00 PM
A joy to read Sara. Such a descriptive write with a layered quality that highlights nature's richness. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 4/3/2021 3:29:00 AM
Brian, Ahh!! Thank you..Sara
Date: 4/2/2021 11:53:00 AM
Hi Sara, Excellent write. Spring is my all-time favorite season. You described very well in this well-written verse. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and a Happy Easter:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/2/2021 1:42:00 PM
Alexis, I also like spring but the allergies are bad for me. It seems they get worse as I get older. Thanks for the best wishes. Sara
Date: 4/1/2021 5:17:00 PM
Brilliant write Sara, it is without doubt a beautiful season. Hope you and your family have a very happy Easter. Tom
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Date: 4/2/2021 4:06:00 AM
Tom, It will be the second Easter I have missed church. I would like to go but I am still concerned that I could get something that I don't want. Maybe soon more people will get their vaccinations and it will be safer. I hope your Easter is the best. Sara
Date: 4/1/2021 4:13:00 AM
Beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/1/2021 4:39:00 AM
Regina, Thank you for your time spent here. Sara
Date: 3/31/2021 8:14:00 PM
Brilliant description of your beautiful garden, home and birds, Sara, all the best:)
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Date: 4/1/2021 4:35:00 AM
Jo, Your visit is inspiring. Sara
Date: 3/31/2021 1:17:00 PM
What a lovely poem, Sara! I like the paragraphs between the haiku. I'm not familiar with the haibun form, but I love your content! Best wishes for a win. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2021 3:16:00 PM
Carolyn, Thanks for the kind review of my work and the wishes for the contest. Sara
Date: 3/31/2021 10:59:00 AM
lovely
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Date: 3/31/2021 12:42:00 PM
Patrick, I appreciate the review. Sara
Date: 3/31/2021 10:48:00 AM
You make me want to come live in your garden forever dear Sara, now more then ever we need to remember the beauty that we once knew, and know that it can exist again soon, Thankyou for the kind visit, winning wishes xo
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Date: 3/31/2021 11:53:00 AM
Mystic, I need all the winning wishes because it takes them to place. I appreciate the thought of living in my garden. It needs my attention to remove those spring weeds that do so well this time of year. Your visits are always appreciated. Sara
Date: 3/31/2021 10:20:00 AM
Brilliant Haibun. So beautiful descriptions and imagery. Best for a win
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Date: 3/31/2021 11:48:00 AM
Victor, Your encouragement is inspiring. Thanks,,Sara

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