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Spring Will Unfold

Spring will peep soon, winter crocus wagging head Will pep my step, fill my heart, colour my mind Lift the weight of winters' might and in its' stead Shower bluebells, harbinger of Spring and its' kind. Daffodils will line the paths, yellows and gold Bird song in harmony as new nests unfold Winter will waive farewell, barren trees will hide Spring will peep soon laying her carpet longside. Rispetto for Dr. Ram Mheta's competition

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/6/2011 5:19:00 PM

Spring had better peep soon! I am so sick of the winter. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 5:04:00 AM

Congratulations Deirdre for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 10:56:00 PM

Oh,my, this one is super fine!! Congratulations and a highest rating! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 5:04:00 PM

Congrats Deirdre on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry my friend... superb as always... enjoy with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2011 4:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/24/2011 12:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's Contest, Deirdre. Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 11:38:00 AM

Such a joyful tribute to the effect spring has on our hearts, Deirdre. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations Deirdre, on being in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/24/2011 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in my contest, Deirdre

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2011 10:17:00 PM

Yet another spring beauty. BESt of luck in this contest, Deirdre! I've seen many good ones, but this is among the happiest! Luv, Andrea

Liz Walsh

Date: 1/8/2011 10:38:00 AM

Deirdre - This is 'magic' - wonderful imagery - Liz

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/7/2011 4:55:00 PM

Lovely lilting lines Deirdre and a magnificent entry into Dr. Ram's challenging contest ... good luck with this rare beauty .. appreciate your encouraging comments on my entry as well ...happy weekend with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2011 3:25:00 PM

Very expressive and creative work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Your review of my work brought sunshine into my thoughts..Sara

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/7/2011 12:33:00 PM

Hi Deirdre. Thanks very much for your praise, I really appreciate it. This is a wonderful entry for the contest. You caught the feeling that invades us all this time of year. The longing for spring and longer,brighter days. Best of luck with this fine write, Eamon