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Spring Waters Flow

Sunlights blinding glow Thawing snow sheets far below Trickles start the show

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Date: 7/6/2020 7:01:00 PM
Metamorphosis ever so succinctly personified into word's and though David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/7/2020 3:11:00 PM
Myself included David I always think or feel less is sometimes more Throw away words or rambling on detracts
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/6/2020 11:00:00 PM
Sometimes I force myself Christopher to minimize a situation into an equation like E=mc2, in poetic brevity, it’s a work in progress cheers David

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