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Spring To Life

By a road traversed by many Where few uphold her beauty She stood a figure so ***** Which only drew me near I wonder if she'll ever know How marvelous she was in snow She shields her blessed bloom Which blossom till the warmth of June A gentle shove upsetting her stance Her sway besets a familiar dance Sentiments have no place in my heart But beneath this enthralling arch The falling fragrance of floral grace Shall trickle my soul to its sweet embrace. Inspired by Muses: Lori & Sharron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/28/2015 8:54:00 AM
Somewhat forced rhymes written with good imaging and with a clear poetic attitude
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 4/28/2015 8:59:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, Mario.... Much appreciated....True words tho <>
Date: 4/10/2015 1:55:00 AM
Would still argue as to whether it's about a lady or a tree! (lol). Great piece of work, bro.
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Date: 4/9/2015 11:44:00 PM
Captivating use of vivid imagery....I couldn't help but picture the beauty being described.
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 10/22/2015 11:04:00 AM
Lizzy!!!!! How come I haven't replied to this yet?? A lasting source of inspiration... thanks for your comment

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