Spring To Life

By a road traversed by many
 Where few uphold her beauty
 She stood a figure so *****
 Which only drew me near
 
 I wonder if she'll ever know 
 How marvelous she was in snow
 She shields her blessed bloom 
 Which blossom till the warmth of June
 
 A gentle shove upsetting her stance
 Her sway besets a familiar dance

 Sentiments have no place in my heart 
 But beneath this enthralling arch
 The falling fragrance of floral grace
 Shall trickle my soul to its sweet embrace.

                                                                   Inspired by Muses: Lori & Sharron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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De Paz Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Somewhat forced rhymes written with good imaging and with a clear poetic attitude
Aniagyei Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Thanks for the visit, Mario.... Much appreciated....True words tho <>
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April 10, 2015 at 1:55 AM
Would still argue as to whether it's about a lady or a tree! (lol). Great piece of work, bro.
Ansah Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Captivating use of vivid imagery....I couldn't help but picture the beauty being described.
Aniagyei Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Lizzy!!!!! How come I haven't replied to this yet?? A lasting source of inspiration... thanks for your comment
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