Spring Time For Me

Spring is in the air
'cause I feel it in my head.
I haven't slept in days now.
Oh!How I miss my bed.

The flowers are all so gorgeous
when they finally start to bloom.
But for me and all my allergies
It's a time for pain and gloom.

There's nothing like a spring time scene
with colors for all to see.
I take my shots and all my meds.
Oh!Why this happen to me.

Spring is in the air now
and I can't see or hear.
But even after all my pain
I love this time of year!


Dustin Self (spring is in the air contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/6/2012 6:31:00 PM
Fun write, Dustin! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Dustin Self
Date: 9/6/2012 10:16:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/5/2012 7:50:00 PM
DUSTIN, congratulations with your xool poem in Tracie's "SPRING" contest.. always :-) PD
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Dustin Self
Date: 9/6/2012 10:15:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/5/2012 9:31:00 AM
Thanks to everyone for your nice comments!
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Date: 9/5/2012 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Spring Is In The Air" contest Dustin. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 2:03:00 AM
ur poem shows a new facet of spring.....congrats on ur win...:))))
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Date: 9/3/2012 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations Dustin..nice poem :)
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Date: 8/22/2012 1:49:00 AM
Love it....a smiling poem :) :) :) - Thank you Dustin. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2012 11:57:00 PM
Nice poem made me smile I love the flow
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Date: 8/21/2012 11:02:00 PM
Hay fever is something some unlucky few have to tolerate at least once a year. Good way to describe it in this poem.
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Date: 8/21/2012 10:38:00 PM
I hope this is not really how you feel because I'm laughing my head off here. A very well-written piece, Dustin. My very best to you in the contest. :)
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Date: 8/21/2012 10:58:00 PM
Ha!Well I"m glad your laughing because that's good for the soul.Thanks for your nice comment.
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