Spring Sunday

beautiful sunshine
quickly morphing into dark
clouds and loud thunder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Alex Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 3:08 AM
There's a powerful light and sound effect. Congratulations!
Hassall Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 3:18 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Pettit Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 10:37 AM
That's the way it was in southern New Jersey this past Sunday. Another good write.
Hassall Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 3:18 AM
Thanks, Robert!
mysore Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 8:35 PM
surprise spring shower it is, I love this write dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Hassall Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 3:52 AM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Congrats in the contest, Kathleen
Hassall Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 3:57 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:01 AM
- Congratulations on your spring haiku, Kathleen :) -
Hassall Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 3:56 AM
Thanks, Annelise!
Fowler Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations Kathleen! :)
Hassall Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 3:57 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Kitchin Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 7:09 AM
Kathleen, nicely done, spring storms are sure to come. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Hassall Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 7:55 AM
Thank you, Tania. This was a fun write.
Mckeithan Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 6:24 PM
Nice Haiku. We are supposed to get this kind of weather soon. Good luck
Hassall Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 3:19 AM
Thanks Oliver. I hope the storms passed through without any damage!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 3:11 PM
Probably coming this way!
Hassall Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 3:19 AM
Thanks, Kim. I hope the storms passed through with more bark than bite.
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