Spring Storm

Clouds and sky enraged
Whirling angry messages
Thunder is its voice

Crashing and banging
Crackles of lightning and limbs
Hail pounding pavement

Leaves rustling about
Wind swirling and crying out
Then comes the silence

Howling winds begin
Moans of fury from cyclones
Raindrops tap loudly

Thrashing of buildings
Trees uprooted and thrown down
Path of destruction

Wind turns to whispers
And raindrops drip rhythmically
Serene once again



* inspired by Raul Moreno’s Sounds of Nature contest.


Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/5/2009 11:28:00 AM
What a wonderful haiku series!!! Good use of imagery. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your well-deserved honor.
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Date: 5/20/2009 12:48:00 PM
Lena - Congratulations on placing in Raul’s, “The Sounds of Nature Contest” God Bless, MJ
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:20:00 PM
Staying home to watch the rain; what a nice activity!!!=) I like this poem, not only because of the language and images but also because of the theme...I love rain and storms jojojo =) thanks for the experience!!!=D=D
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:53:00 PM
Lena, concrats on your placement in Raul's contest.
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Date: 5/17/2009 12:59:00 AM
Stirring poem Lolita, James
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Date: 5/15/2009 2:50:00 PM
Wonderful write Lena, congratulations on your win!-AA
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Date: 5/15/2009 9:57:00 AM
Beautifully written - I could feel the energy of the storm in your words. Congrats on your win Lolita :-D
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Date: 5/15/2009 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Lolita Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/15/2009 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Lena, on this wonderful poem! Best wishes and may your memories keep you warm today! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 5/15/2009 5:38:00 AM
Warmest congrats on your win in Raul's contest! Such a beautiful poem! Hugs to you on this difficult day. Love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 5/15/2009 2:14:00 AM
Lolita, congrats for placing in my contest...Raul
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Date: 5/1/2009 6:03:00 PM
Nice sounds and thanks for your comment.
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Date: 5/1/2009 7:04:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful congrats. Been off the soup this week for personal reasons. Hope to be back soon. So sorry for missing your poems. Have a beautiful weekend. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/30/2009 1:49:00 PM
Wonderfully descriptive piece, Lolita! Best of luck in Raul's contest. Thanks for your sweet comments. Donna
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Date: 4/26/2009 6:27:00 PM
Excellent writing, Lolita. You capture the intensity of the storm very well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:13:00 AM
Were supposed to get one of these today; i love storms! This poem is excellent; as powerful as its subject. good luck, and thank you for supporting us in the contest!!!!! :) Blessings, Kristin
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:55:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Lolita.Rgds Brian ^ thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/24/2009 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments! We must be of like minds, as far as our favorite sounds in nature go! Your choka is beautiful also. We had a storm just last night and I went to the porch to enjoy it. My neighbor said I'm strange. lol
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Date: 4/24/2009 8:40:00 AM
Very beautiful. Smooth flow of words. it's also uniquely, since tornado surprises Spring. I like it.
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Date: 4/24/2009 8:35:00 AM
It feels as if we have weathered the storm, and now there is finally peace. Well done! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 4/24/2009 7:59:00 AM
Sounds I love to hear ... o my soul splashed in this tropic moment of joy ... bet you did not know that Shango is the king-god of thunder in the pantheon of Nigerian-Caribbean Orishas. Thunder is the voice of justice... great write, and best of luck inthe contest, my sister.
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:09:00 AM
Well done..best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 4/24/2009 5:37:00 AM
Incredible imagery! Awesome work in this powerful haiku nature sequence. Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/24/2009 4:12:00 AM
Lena, I can feel evey sensation of this cool, high-energy storm! great-write! Jim
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Date: 4/24/2009 12:17:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest Lolita...Raul
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