Spring Sounds

It's quiet now, too quiet for Spring:
Sere-brown matted grasses huddle close,
Clinging tightly to patches of congealed Earth,
Nature's chill bosom flinty and unyielding. 
No wind yet whips up tremble in bush or tree--
Branches too-long barren of bud or twig--
Or ruffles gentle water's surface in the brook or stream
Of wild woods and forests, yet napping darkly...

...'Til warm breezes whisper, stirring souls and spirits:
Then do wondering necks snap to attention, nostrils flare,
Eyes widen, ears like antennae, twitch on high-alert.
Then do voices emerge, as waving grasses secrete their dew,
As tree buds burst forth, tiny gnarled knobs rubbing rheum drops
From their orbs, freeing visions from winter's howl. 
Spring newly resurgent, resplendent, glorious, Inviting!
--As lovers loll the sandy beach, mingling with the moonbeams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Fantastic imagery and nicely written verse, Gershon , congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Eve, you are too kind! Thank you, thank you, my friend. Best always, Gershon
Gentry Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:06 AM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again with this awesome spring poem. :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Gershon. Well done.
Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:07 PM
Appreciated, Line! :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Can feel the blooming. Awesome stuff. Congratulations dear poet! xomo :)
Wolf Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Thank you so much, dear reviewer! Happy Spring, Maureen!! :)
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Gershon, you have created a wonderfully descriptive write, a joy to read.
Wolf Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Thank you much, James for your kind words. Best wishes, Gershon
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Congratulation on your placement win. A wonderful poem of spring. Enjoyed it.
Wolf Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Thank you, Susan---as I enjoyed reading yours about the yellow daffodils!! Hopefully Spring has finally sprung! :) gw
Cornish Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:10 PM
You truly captured the feel of the season, thank you for your thoughtful interpretation
Wolf Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:42 PM
And thank you, Craig, for sponsoring this contest, which helped me (and I imagine helped others) s-t-r-e-t-c-h our Poetry Muse. A tip of the fedora to you! Best wishes, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Your imagery is impeccable, and I love how the poem started getting faster and faster.
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Thanks for reading this one and for your gracious words...Interestingly, I hadn't realized how (much) the poem sped up in the 2nd stanza. Having re-read it after your comment, I see that you're 100% right. Astute analysis, CK! :)
Dutta Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Gorgeous Spring is at door step. Congrats Gershon. Best wishes
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Thank you for your visit and your kind words...Here's to Spring where you are! :) gw
Gentile Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Exquisite Gershon. The Spring Sounds are coming soon, I hope!!
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Thank you, Mike. They're here in Chicago...If they're not present where you are, tell 'em you're gonna mark 'em tardy! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Lovely imagery, Gershon. Powerful.
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Line, much appreciated. Three cheers for Spring! :) gw
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