spring song

cool breeze gently hugs
moist mud mildly maneuvers ~
stilled seeds sing solos
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Crandall Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 9:13 AM
Great last line! Congratulations!
Alex Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 7:22 AM
Beautiful poem! Congrats :)
Alex Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
mysore Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 8:30 PM
solo songs, now that is a beautiful thought dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Alex Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 2:41 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:42 AM
So creative! Big congrats in the contest
Alex Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 2:41 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:06 AM
- Congratulations on your spring haiku, Christuraj :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 2:40 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Emate Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 8:51 AM
This is a lovely haiku, Christuraj. Congratulations on your win.
Alex Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Fowler Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations Alex! :)
Alex Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Kitchin Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 7:34 AM
Christuraj, a wonderful spring haiku with wonderful spring growth imagery. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Alex Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Thank you very much for giving me the opportunity. May God bless you!
Cunningham Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 1:30 AM
Love the image Christuraj, lovely to see the flowers growing again, makes you want to join in the chorus, it certainly lifts our spirits to see everything coming back to life again. Best of luck in the contest.. Tom
Alex Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 10:32 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Jones Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 10:52 PM
Nice haiku!
Jones Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:12 PM
God bless you too!
Alex Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 11:04 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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