Spring Song

The world is quiet,
delicately painted with
dazzling white highlights.
Strange pillowed shapes lurk beneath
snowy soft blankets.
Muted melt melodies ring,
silently singing.
Obstinate earth emerges;
spring song steadily surges.

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Sixth Place Winner For the Spring Showers or Spring Flowers Poetry Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh Written 03/12/2022
We got an unexpected 1" of snow last night; Missy and I were out in it, and everywhere, all around, the quiet melodies of dripping, trickling, rivulets forming as the snow melts and Spring re-emerges. Nice!
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Chamberlain Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 12:50 PM
I've just come across your poem whilst browsing on poetry soup. Gets me excited for spring. Nicely penned.
Kyser Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Thanks, Joanna, where do you live? We are nearly pushing summer here in north Alabama!
Alex Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 8:06 PM
Beautiful song, indeed! Congratulations!
Legros Kelley Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 6:38 PM
Very nice! Thank you for your submission and congratulations on your high placing win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest! :) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 3:03 PM
The beauty of the season is exalted with your words Jeff. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Spring Song" is a wonderful write and singing to me. Have a blessed day............
Kyser Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 9:20 AM
Thanks! And you as well!
Alex Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 9:35 PM
"Strange pillowed shapes lurk beneath snowy soft blankets" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Kyser Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Thanks, this place is fertile ground for imagery!
Mcintosh Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 11:18 AM
I love this. Congrats on the win. God bless you. Love, Gina
Kyser Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Thanks, Gina, have a blessed day too!
Calasibetta Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 10:48 AM
We are having snow here too~lots of it! But your poem reminds us there is hope for the awakening~Spring will emerge even through the "obstinate" earth. :)Paulette
Kyser Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 10:52 AM
We had some pretty warm weather here before the plunge to the 20s, so I knew the obstinate earth wasn't going to stay covered up long! I just hope the freeze didn't take out my apricots and peaches for the year :-(
Romios Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Best wishes Jeff! I have not seen snow for years,Living in northern Ca. But I remember of what you speak and my years in Chicago. Your poetry is more than lovely, Pangie
Kyser Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Pangie. I was born in Palo Alto, and remember hiking in and around Mount Lassen as a boy, but have not been back to California in many years except for a brief trip to Auburn. Where do you live?
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 9:35 AM
Beautifully-written verse, Jeff. You have grown in your talent for expression. This is imagism at its finest.
Kyser Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 10:05 AM
You're rubbing off, my friend!
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