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Spring Smiles--Haiku

spring, swirling sweet scents. startling sun, sudden showers. soft starling, so stunned. 3/28/2021 ~1~ Alliterative Haiku

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/31/2021 8:26:00 AM

Nice!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/31/2021 10:17:00 AM

Thanks, Kim, Hugs, Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/29/2021 4:46:00 PM

Well written Pangie, you've created a new form, a panku. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/30/2021 11:02:00 AM

LOL Tom. This is a traditional Japanese haiku. I created nothing. I don't know the many schools and forms of Japanese haiku. Ilike this form, it's warm and welcoming to my poetic soul~ Be well, Tom Hugs, Pangie xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/29/2021 3:41:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, wow! a poem of Spring and the scent of flowers. Hugs Da\rlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/29/2021 3:58:00 PM

Hello Darlene! Really lovely here. Maria bought a huge, mulri color spinner that blows in the wind, too. Mmm...Spring Pangie xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/29/2021 3:15:00 PM

Great one! Well written :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/29/2021 3:55:00 PM

Bless you Heidi. Appreciated. PANGiR xx

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 3/29/2021 2:58:00 PM

Great haiku! Expertly constructed, Pangie - Bob

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/29/2021 3:52:00 PM

THANKS , Bob...never tried one like this before. Such a pleasure ...thank you. PANGIE XX