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05/11/25

Spring Monoku

First Place.

Contest by JCB Brul

spring sparkling, birds sing, nestlings born : sweet tweets in cadence touching heart.

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Date: 5/29/2025 10:51:00 PM
This is a charming and concise piece, bursting with the joyous energy of spring! It effectively captures the fresh, new life of the season. It's a sweet and evocative little poem that truly celebrates the freshness of spring! Congratulations, Ma'am Ani
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Date: 5/26/2025 12:17:00 PM
Love especially the second half! Congrats!
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Date: 5/26/2025 9:58:00 AM
charming ~
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Date: 5/26/2025 2:40:00 AM
- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Anisha :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/25/2025 9:25:00 PM
Glorious one for spring. Congrats
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Date: 5/11/2025 4:08:00 PM
Just loverly! CayCay
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Date: 5/11/2025 11:30:00 AM
- Lovely line, Anisha :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
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