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Spring Sensations

Spring awoke from her long Winter's dream, to a world of colors and warm sun beams. Birds are singing their heavenly refrains, the scent in the air of gentle sweet rain. The world alive with tomorrow's promise, Nature's bounty, its beauty a bonus. The trees are adorned in lovely green leaves, flowers filled with nectar, as busy as bees. The woodland creatures come out of their sleep, a brand new day they are anxious to meet. Fields fertile as far as the eye can see, ready to yield flora that grows wild and free. God smiles down on the scene he has painted, a garden, his gift for the one we have traded. 10/22/18

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Date: 3/16/2019 11:26:00 AM
Beautifully done, Wren, great imagery. Congratulations on your well deserved win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/16/2019 1:26:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 3/15/2019 11:02:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Wren! Excellent! Janice
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/16/2019 1:26:00 PM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 3/15/2019 10:12:00 PM
Wren, a beautiful poem with a positive message. "The world alive with tomorrow's promise..." The reference in the last stanza to God's generosity in spite of paradise lost is brilliant. Congratulations on your win on Mile 24 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 3 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/15/2019 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Mark! Have a blessed day my friend!
Date: 3/15/2019 9:53:00 PM
A lovely and faithful Sonnet, Wren, and such a beautiful write! Congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/15/2019 10:44:00 PM
Thank you Gregory! Have a wonderful weekend!
Date: 12/4/2018 10:09:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, Wren , very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination and the emotions a wonderful sense of peace and harmony. Congratulations on your win!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/4/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comments Eve. God bless you.
Date: 12/4/2018 12:45:00 AM
and another Congratulation!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/4/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you p.s!
Date: 11/15/2018 12:51:00 PM
back with congratulations!
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Date: 11/15/2018 9:24:00 AM
This is beautiful. The words flow so nicely. A FAVE from me :)
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Date: 11/10/2018 4:41:00 PM
Lovely, Wren. Congrats on your win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/10/2018 10:50:00 PM
Thanks Line!
Date: 11/10/2018 4:06:00 PM
A very lovely winning poem Wren. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/10/2018 10:51:00 PM
Thank you Connie for the kind words.
Date: 11/10/2018 3:29:00 PM
Those last two lines are very impactful! Congrats on your placement, Wren! <3 Kim
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/10/2018 10:53:00 PM
Thanks Kim and have a great weekend.
Date: 10/23/2018 6:05:00 PM
This is a beautiful, amazing rhyme that you've penned, Wren; best of luck in the contest.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/23/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thank you ML enjoy your evening.

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