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Spring Rendezvous

The scents of cherry blossoms start to fill the air. I see dainty petals hanging like precious jewels whilst over them are on-lookers clouds of white. I stop and pause a while to watch them caress like lovers in a sacred rendezvous. My heart melts as~


               cotton clouds descend 
                     to kiss pearly pink blossoms 
                                          in celestial tryst  



25 March 2021
For Springtime Haibun Poetry Contest
Sponsored by M. L. Kiser 


Notes: I took this photo ( Live/ no filter) yesterday while I was strolling beside a park in Busan, South Korea. It inspired me to write this first Haibun.
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Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Great snapshot. I am sure the cherry trees have been lovely this year. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Balasubramanian Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Wow! Beautiful. Straight from heart. Congratulations on your win. Take care, Rama
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 6:42 PM
Congratulations, Dear Poet. Lovely Haibun! Very impressive! BW ~ Mala
Ligon Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 10:16 PM
Beautiful photo and inspiring haibun!
Mitra Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:28 PM
Cherry Blossoms and cotton candy skies...I can taste the sweetness in your poem...Take care dear friend :))
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:25 AM
Ohhhh...so impressive! congratulations on your first beautiful haibun! From real experiences! Love ~ Mala
Mcintosh Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Beautiful!! I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina - would be a perfect write for the spring haibun contest
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