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The scents of cherry blossoms start to fill the air. I see dainty petals hanging like precious jewels whilst over them are on-lookers clouds of white. I stop and pause a while to watch them caress like lovers in a sacred rendezvous. My heart melts as~ cotton clouds descend to kiss pearly pink blossoms in celestial tryst 25 March 2021 For Springtime Haibun Poetry Contest Sponsored by M. L. Kiser Notes: I took this photo ( Live/ no filter) yesterday while I was strolling beside a park in Busan, South Korea. It inspired me to write this first Haibun.

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Date: 4/6/2021 5:04:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Great snapshot. I am sure the cherry trees have been lovely this year. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara
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Date: 4/5/2021 8:12:00 PM
Wow! Beautiful. Straight from heart. Congratulations on your win. Take care, Rama
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Date: 4/5/2021 6:42:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Poet. Lovely Haibun! Very impressive! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 3/26/2021 10:16:00 PM
Beautiful photo and inspiring haibun!
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Date: 3/26/2021 6:28:00 PM
Cherry Blossoms and cotton candy skies...I can taste the sweetness in your poem...Take care dear friend :))
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Date: 3/26/2021 7:25:00 AM
Ohhhh...so impressive! congratulations on your first beautiful haibun! From real experiences! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 3/25/2021 10:44:00 AM
Beautiful!! I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina - would be a perfect write for the spring haibun contest
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