Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Spring Rain

A golden sun climbs higher still
Warming the night away
Roosters voices float 'pon the breeze
Spring calls come out and play

Tomorrow a storm might come
With torrents of cold rain
Thunder and lighting flashing round
A chill in the air again

Rain that washes the gold pollen
And purifies the air
Also giving a thirst quenching drink
To buds who'll blossom fair

Spring love reach deep within the soul
Let the spring fever rise 
Don't douse the flames burning hotter
Those glowing embers apprise

Only a few golden spring days 
Then summer's fervent heat 
Rest in the arms of spring my love
Soon our journey's complete

Let's burn away the last of daylight's
Hours, embraced in love's flame
Planting memories of our fire
That will live on untamed

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Jude Herrick November 7, 2023 at 3:29 AM A wonderful poem, Sara ! Sara Kendrick November 7, 2023 at 7:41 AM Why, thank you, Jude. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Sandy Tadros June 4, 2015 at 10:18 AM This is brilliantly written! I especially loved the last stanza. Sara Kendrick June 4, 2015 at 2:30 PM Sandy, I am so glad that you liked my work..I appreciate you stopping by, reading and taking time to comment.. Sara

Isaiah Zerbst May 5, 2015 at 12:24 PM "Rest in the arms of spring". That is the most brilliant line I have read in a long time. It evokes such feeling and delightful visions I can hardly stand it.

Gary Bateman May 5, 2015 at 12:06 PM Sara, "Spring Rain" here quite touching to me. It gives me a definite sense of life, living, renewal, and progression. The imagery and the message you have with this write weave together to form a compelling picture and takeaway for your reader!! Superbly Done!! A "7" + FAV!! Best Wishes, Gary

Kelly Deschler May 3, 2015 at 2:10 PM There is nothing more refreshing than a spring rain... I enjoyed the beautiful imagery in this very well written piece. Nicely done, Sara!

M. L. Kiser May 1, 2015 at 6:55 AM Wow, what a beautiful image. Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:46 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Constance La France April 29, 2015 at 3:49 PM Sara, beautifully written 7 and thanks for visiting my captcha poem Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:46 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam April 29, 2015 at 2:25 AM Excellent. Lovely tribute. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:47 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Matthew Anish April 27, 2015 at 10:27 PM Nice tribute to spring which has arrived a moment too soon. "Rest in the arms of spring" - great line. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:47 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2015 at 12:01 PM - "Spring love reach deep within the soul Let the spring fever rise" ...... as the words come from a "love novel" - Beautifully written Sara ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:48 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Hannington Mumo April 27, 2015 at 6:46 AM You are a truly endowed poet. 7+! Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:48 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Naghmeh Heidari April 27, 2015 at 1:29 AM Hi Sara, thanks for your comment on my poem. This is an exiting poem about spring, I like it. Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:48 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Shadow Hamilton April 26, 2015 at 5:21 PM hot and ardent Sara love it hugs 7 Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:49 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Nette Onclaud April 26, 2015 at 5:18 PM you uplift with this spring delight, sara.. love the last stanza... huggs Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:49 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

The Grahamburglar April 26, 2015 at 4:02 PM This is beautifully written and you did a great job with the vivid imagery. This is an easy 7. As a very minor note: I think you want the word douse as opposed to douce. ;) Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:49 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Robert Lindley April 25, 2015 at 8:07 PM Magnificent poem my friend! You captured the essence and beauty of Spring so well. A true pleasure to read. A7 and must assuredly place high in any contest IMHO. Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:50 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2015 at 3:34 PM Such a beautiful description of both your love for spring and your "Spring love" that reaches into your soul. Romance is not just for teens. I'm sure this will be a big winner in the contest. It's the best I've seen! Love, Carolyn Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:50 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

D.W. Rodgers April 25, 2015 at 1:43 PM Well said- I love the smell of the first good spring rain - after the ground has thawed mind you. Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:51 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Tim Smith April 25, 2015 at 10:29 AM We are have a nice soaking rain now...it is much need at this time of year....lovely Tim Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:51 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2015 at 9:52 AM really nice one from your pen, Sara. IS this for that contest about burning up the day!! Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:51 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Anna Hopper April 25, 2015 at 8:47 AM Yeah, WOW! Excellent, beautiful poem! A definite 7 for me! Adding to my favorites! Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:52 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Nandita Das April 25, 2015 at 8:13 AM Feeling rapturous. Intoxicated with this beauty of spring. #7 Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:46 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Jan Allison April 25, 2015 at 8:03 AM absolutely delightful Sara such glorious imagery and i love accompanying picture - love cherry blossom:-) Hugs Jan xx Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:46 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Jack Horne April 25, 2015 at 8:03 AM lovely write, my friend - I know you're always glad when rain washes that pollen and purifies the air! Sara Kendrick May 1, 2015 at 9:53 AM Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara