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Spring Rain

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A golden sun climbs higher still Warming the night away Roosters voices float 'pon the breeze Spring calls come out and play Tomorrow a storm might come With torrents of cold rain Thunder and lighting flashing round A chill in the air again Rain that washes the gold pollen And purifies the air Also giving a thirst quenching drink To buds who'll blossom fair Spring love reach deep within the soul Let the spring fever rise Don't douse the flames burning hotter Those glowing embers apprise Only a few golden spring days Then summer's fervent heat Rest in the arms of spring my love Soon our journey's complete Let's burn away the last of daylight's Hours, embraced in love's flame Planting memories of our fire That will live on untamed

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Jude Herrick

Date: 11/7/2023 3:29:00 AM

A wonderful poem, Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/7/2023 7:41:00 AM

Why, thank you, Jude. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Sandy Tadros

Date: 6/4/2015 10:18:00 AM

This is brilliantly written! I especially loved the last stanza.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/4/2015 2:30:00 PM

Sandy, I am so glad that you liked my work..I appreciate you stopping by, reading and taking time to comment.. Sara

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/5/2015 12:24:00 PM

"Rest in the arms of spring". That is the most brilliant line I have read in a long time. It evokes such feeling and delightful visions I can hardly stand it.

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/5/2015 12:06:00 PM

Sara, "Spring Rain" here quite touching to me. It gives me a definite sense of life, living, renewal, and progression. The imagery and the message you have with this write weave together to form a compelling picture and takeaway for your reader!! Superbly Done!! A "7" + FAV!! Best Wishes, Gary

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/3/2015 2:10:00 PM

There is nothing more refreshing than a spring rain... I enjoyed the beautiful imagery in this very well written piece. Nicely done, Sara!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/1/2015 6:55:00 AM

Wow, what a beautiful image.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:46:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your presence is appreciated for it is uplifting to know that someone reads and finds my work in some way helpful or interesting..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 4/29/2015 3:49:00 PM

Sara, beautifully written 7 and thanks for visiting my captcha poem

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:46:00 AM

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/29/2015 2:25:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely tribute. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:47:00 AM

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/27/2015 10:27:00 PM

Nice tribute to spring which has arrived a moment too soon. "Rest in the arms of spring" - great line. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:47:00 AM

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2015 12:01:00 PM

- "Spring love reach deep within the soul Let the spring fever rise" ...... as the words come from a "love novel" - Beautifully written Sara ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:48:00 AM

Hannington Mumo

Date: 4/27/2015 6:46:00 AM

You are a truly endowed poet. 7+!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:48:00 AM

Naghmeh Heidari

Date: 4/27/2015 1:29:00 AM

Hi Sara, thanks for your comment on my poem. This is an exiting poem about spring, I like it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:48:00 AM

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/26/2015 5:21:00 PM

hot and ardent Sara love it hugs 7

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:49:00 AM

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/26/2015 5:18:00 PM

you uplift with this spring delight, sara.. love the last stanza... huggs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:49:00 AM

The Grahamburglar

Date: 4/26/2015 4:02:00 PM

This is beautifully written and you did a great job with the vivid imagery. This is an easy 7. As a very minor note: I think you want the word douse as opposed to douce. ;)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:49:00 AM

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/25/2015 8:07:00 PM

Magnificent poem my friend! You captured the essence and beauty of Spring so well. A true pleasure to read. A7 and must assuredly place high in any contest IMHO.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:50:00 AM

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2015 3:34:00 PM

Such a beautiful description of both your love for spring and your "Spring love" that reaches into your soul. Romance is not just for teens. I'm sure this will be a big winner in the contest. It's the best I've seen! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2015 9:50:00 AM