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Written, April 8, 2024
For The Premiere Contest, “Sonnet-Lipogram" (no letter A)
Sponsor, Emile

Premiere Contest WinnerSpring Promise

It might begin with the sweet songs of birds when sunrise blooms its glow, seeming divine. We view the month to see those written words; “Spring now begins” confirms our current sign. The resurrection from grim Winter sleep will move full-swing while buds unveil to stir. Soft colors of new willow greens will sweep- blot Winter drudge while brighter views recur. Fresh hope rebirths the life in every soul when Springtime flowers crown the rolling fields. While gushing brooks from melted snow unroll- the feeling of new life within us yields. This mystery of rebirth gifts our Spring; gives promise in new life for everything!
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Drowley Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Reaffirms the glory of rebirth.
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May 15, 2024 at 7:06 PM
Sandra, a beautiful poem, congratulations on your trophy placement.
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May 15, 2024 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations Sandra! Your wonderful poem (Spring Promise) earned you “First” place in my contest.” Very well done, my friend, Emile.
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April 23, 2024 at 5:06 AM
Belated POTD Congratulations Sandra! Your poem bright, uplighting and made me feel happy! Lovely indeed! Debx
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April 10, 2024 at 12:38 AM
A stunning Lipogram Sonnet Sandra, Sorry I never look at POTD's, but your entry in the contest caught my eye. A beautiful Springtime Sonnet and not an "a" to be seen. Masterful. Really enjoyed it. Made me wish it was Springtime again here in Australia. Best wishes.
Haight Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 12:13 PM
Thanks so much, SV, for visiting my poem and leaving your much-appreciated comments. Very uplifting and encouraging! Hugs, Sandra
B. Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 9:59 PM
Such a lovely sonnet, Sandra! The imagery is fantastic.. A warm congratulations on your POTD! Many blessings to you..
Haight Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Robertina, I am so thankful for your visit, lovely comments, and congratulations! Very uplifting! Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations on POTD Sandra! I really like "sweep-blot Winter drudge" You're probably the first person ever to come up that phrase.
Haight Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Robert, for visiting my poem with the congratulations and encouraging critique! Much appreciated! Sandra :)
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April 9, 2024 at 7:38 PM
Heartfelt Congratulaions, Sandra! Pangie xx
Haight Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 12:08 PM
Pangie, I am thankful for your visit, and congratulations! Sandra ;)
Scott Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 7:27 PM
We need the positivity of Springtime don't we? Captured so lyrically here Sandra, thank you for brightening our day and well done! Sam :)
Haight Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 12:06 PM
Thanks so much, Sam, for your visit and uplifting comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 11:25 AM
A beautiful promise! Congratulations on POTD, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Thanks, Kim, for your encouraging comment, and congratulations! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "Spring Promise" write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:58 PM
Thank you, Paula! I am so glad you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate your uplifting comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on the honor of POTD for this lovely sonnet so full of wonderful imagery. I enjoyed it immensely..
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 5:01 PM
Hi, Nancy! Thank you for visiting my poem and leaving your uplifting comments and congratulations! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 9:14 AM
' Spring now begins, ' and it's a ' new life for everything. ' Such a beautiful time, indeed. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Sandra, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:56 PM
Brandy, thank you so much for your very uplifting comments and congratulations! I appreciate your visit! Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 8:49 AM
The season of rebirth, Congrats on POTD Sandra
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:53 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph! I appreciate your visit and Congrats! Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Sweet image Sandra. Congratulations on POTD! :)
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:53 PM
Thank you very much, Linda! I am happy you enjoyed my poem! Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 4:18 AM
Dearest Sandra, your poem beautifully captures the essence of renewal and hope that comes with the changing seasons. I loved how your imagery of birdsong, blooming buds, and gushing brooks evokes a sense of awakening and rejuvenation. It's the endless cycle of life and the promise of new beginnings. This enchanting piece deserves to be POTD, CONGRATS! Blessings, Daniel
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:51 PM
Daniel, thank you again for visiting my poems and leaving your encouraging words, especially about my imagery. I always feel very uplifted and encouraged after reading your lovely comments. Sandra ;)
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April 9, 2024 at 4:17 AM
Sandra, a beautiful poem, I look forward to the Spring transformation every year, congratulations on POTD.
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 5:03 PM
Hi, Tania, thank you for reading my poem and for your lovely, uplifting comment, and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 3:08 AM
Dropping back with many congrats Sandra, I am SO delighted you have been honoured with POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:43 PM
Thank you again, Jan! Something I did not expect, but I am honored my poem was chosen. Thank you for your support and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 2:14 AM
Beautiful poetry, Sanda, enjoyed. Warmest congratulations on POTD
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:33 PM
Hi, Seeker. Thank you for reading my poem and for your congratulations and encouraging comments!
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April 9, 2024 at 2:05 AM
A beautiful spring sonnet Sandra, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Thank you very much, Beryl! I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 1:40 AM
I loved reading this, Aysha
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:31 PM
Thanks, Aysha, for your visit and lovely comment. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2024 at 1:27 AM
Stunning poem dedicated to this beautiful and blooming season. Many Congratulations on the POTD Sandra. Very well deserved. Have a great day!
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:29 PM
Thanks, Maria, for your visit, congratulations, and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Severo Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 1:02 AM
Your poetry inspires me, so wonderful, xoxo
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:26 PM
Thank you, Aurore, for your nice comment! Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 12:32 AM
And a welcome season it is too Sandra, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:25 PM
Thank you, Tom, for your visit and supportive comments! Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:11 PM
It is a joy to read your spring time poem Sandra, it is quite a challenge to write this sonnet lipogram form and you have nailed it. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for your visit and your help! Hugs, Sandra
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