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Written, April 8, 2024
For The Premiere Contest, “Sonnet-Lipogram" (no letter A)
Sponsor, Emile

It might begin with the sweet songs of birds when sunrise blooms its glow, seeming divine. We view the month to see those written words; “Spring now begins” confirms our current sign. The resurrection from grim Winter sleep will move full-swing while buds unveil to stir. Soft colors of new willow greens will sweep- blot Winter drudge while brighter views recur. Fresh hope rebirths the life in every soul when Springtime flowers crown the rolling fields. While gushing brooks from melted snow unroll- the feeling of new life within us yields. This mystery of rebirth gifts our Spring; gives promise in new life for everything!

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Date: 4/23/2024 5:06:00 AM
Belated POTD Congratulations Sandra! Your poem bright, uplighting and made me feel happy! Lovely indeed! Debx
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Date: 4/10/2024 12:38:00 AM
A stunning Lipogram Sonnet Sandra, Sorry I never look at POTD's, but your entry in the contest caught my eye. A beautiful Springtime Sonnet and not an "a" to be seen. Masterful. Really enjoyed it. Made me wish it was Springtime again here in Australia. Best wishes.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/11/2024 12:13:00 PM
Thanks so much, SV, for visiting my poem and leaving your much-appreciated comments. Very uplifting and encouraging! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 9:59:00 PM
Such a lovely sonnet, Sandra! The imagery is fantastic.. A warm congratulations on your POTD! Many blessings to you..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/11/2024 12:10:00 PM
Robertina, I am so thankful for your visit, lovely comments, and congratulations! Very uplifting! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Sandra! I really like "sweep-blot Winter drudge" You're probably the first person ever to come up that phrase.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/11/2024 12:09:00 PM
Thank you, Robert, for visiting my poem with the congratulations and encouraging critique! Much appreciated! Sandra :)
Date: 4/9/2024 7:38:00 PM
Heartfelt Congratulaions, Sandra! Pangie xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/11/2024 12:08:00 PM
Pangie, I am thankful for your visit, and congratulations! Sandra ;)
Date: 4/9/2024 7:27:00 PM
We need the positivity of Springtime don't we? Captured so lyrically here Sandra, thank you for brightening our day and well done! Sam :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/11/2024 12:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam, for your visit and uplifting comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 6:11:00 PM
Queen of rhyme poetry! Congrats
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 6:22:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Tom! I enjoyed writing this without using the letter "A". A fun challenge! Glad you enjoyed it. Sandra ;)
Date: 4/9/2024 11:25:00 AM
A beautiful promise! Congratulations on POTD, Sandra!
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Date: 4/9/2024 5:00:00 PM
Thanks, Kim, for your encouraging comment, and congratulations! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "Spring Promise" write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:58:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! I am so glad you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate your uplifting comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on the honor of POTD for this lovely sonnet so full of wonderful imagery. I enjoyed it immensely..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 5:01:00 PM
Hi, Nancy! Thank you for visiting my poem and leaving your uplifting comments and congratulations! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 9:14:00 AM
' Spring now begins, ' and it's a ' new life for everything. ' Such a beautiful time, indeed. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Sandra, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:56:00 PM
Brandy, thank you so much for your very uplifting comments and congratulations! I appreciate your visit! Hugs, Sandra
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/9/2024 12:48:00 PM
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Date: 4/9/2024 8:49:00 AM
The season of rebirth, Congrats on POTD Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:53:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph! I appreciate your visit and Congrats! Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 7:55:00 AM
Sweet image Sandra. Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:53:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda! I am happy you enjoyed my poem! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 4:58:00 AM
I loved reading your uplifting poem filled with the vibrant energy and imagery of spring. Congrats on your POTD designation!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:52:00 PM
Sara, I am so grateful for your nice comments and congratulations! Thank you for your visit! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 4:18:00 AM
Dearest Sandra, your poem beautifully captures the essence of renewal and hope that comes with the changing seasons. I loved how your imagery of birdsong, blooming buds, and gushing brooks evokes a sense of awakening and rejuvenation. It's the endless cycle of life and the promise of new beginnings. This enchanting piece deserves to be POTD, CONGRATS! Blessings, Daniel
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:51:00 PM
Daniel, thank you again for visiting my poems and leaving your encouraging words, especially about my imagery. I always feel very uplifted and encouraged after reading your lovely comments. Sandra ;)
Date: 4/9/2024 4:17:00 AM
Sandra, a beautiful poem, I look forward to the Spring transformation every year, congratulations on POTD.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 5:03:00 PM
Hi, Tania, thank you for reading my poem and for your lovely, uplifting comment, and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 3:08:00 AM
Dropping back with many congrats Sandra, I am SO delighted you have been honoured with POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:43:00 PM
Thank you again, Jan! Something I did not expect, but I am honored my poem was chosen. Thank you for your support and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 2:14:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, Sanda, enjoyed. Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:33:00 PM
Hi, Seeker. Thank you for reading my poem and for your congratulations and encouraging comments!
Date: 4/9/2024 2:05:00 AM
A beautiful spring sonnet Sandra, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Beryl! I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 1:40:00 AM
I loved reading this, Aysha
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:31:00 PM
Thanks, Aysha, for your visit and lovely comment. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 1:27:00 AM
Stunning poem dedicated to this beautiful and blooming season. Many Congratulations on the POTD Sandra. Very well deserved. Have a great day!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:29:00 PM
Thanks, Maria, for your visit, congratulations, and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 1:02:00 AM
Your poetry inspires me, so wonderful, xoxo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Aurore, for your nice comment! Sandra
Date: 4/9/2024 12:32:00 AM
And a welcome season it is too Sandra, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, for your visit and supportive comments! Sandra
Date: 4/8/2024 2:11:00 PM
It is a joy to read your spring time poem Sandra, it is quite a challenge to write this sonnet lipogram form and you have nailed it. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2024 4:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for your visit and your help! Hugs, Sandra

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