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Spring Procession

April's scratchy rain drives daffodils ornate glow garden temple bliss spiked blooms of proud gold sweet charm of composed spires in sunlight leisure drift to awareness canopy of yellow buds that come up for air Composed: April 20, 2021

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/11/2021 4:29:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku chain. Congratulations on your Win!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/11/2021 1:45:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj. Hope you are well. Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2021 3:08:00 PM

Congrats on this winner. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. It is very descriptive of the blossoms of daffodils. I enjoy their beauty after a long hard winter. Thanks for all your visits to my pages. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/4/2021 7:28:00 PM

Hello Sara, Most kind of you to comment on my submission. You are inspiration dear lady. Best wishes, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2021 2:34:00 PM

Congrats for your win, Brian.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/27/2021 2:53:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thanks very much for your kind regards. I admire your stellar work. Best wishes, Brian

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/26/2021 7:11:00 PM

Dear Brian, your haiku chain is as lustrous as a triple strand of pearls. Each haiku is a beauty on its own, but together, they create graduated layers of lovely imagery. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/27/2021 6:55:00 AM

Greetings Susan. Your sincerely kind words give motivation to this aging guy who dabbles in poetry. Thank you immensely. Brian

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/26/2021 7:06:00 PM

Brian, congrats on your win with your Spring haiku! Blessings, Kim M

Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/27/2021 6:52:00 AM

Thank you Kim. Very kind of you to read the submission + leave a positive note. Best wishes, Brian

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/22/2021 8:56:00 AM

Refreshing chain of haikus. I love the "ornate glow" from the rain.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/22/2021 9:48:00 AM

Hello Juliet, Thanks very much for your drop by + thoughtful, encouraging note. Best wishes, Brian