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The hills come alive with vibrant poppy hues, From crimson red to golden yellow, a kaleidoscope of views. They cast their shadows on the valley's gentle slopes, A stunning aura, beauty that elopes. In my mind's eye, I envision my love so dear, Strolling with me through the poppy field, without a fear. Bathed in the gentle springtime sun's warm embrace, I place poppy flowers delicately in her hair, with grace. Enchanted by the beauty, I feel heaven on this earthly place. Birds flutter and sing amidst pink blossom trees, Awakening me from my dreamy, love-filled reveries. They dance and sway in the gentle breeze, To the whispered melodies of the poppies' tease. All winter they awaited, hidden in hedges below the hills, Now, in full bloom, their beauty spills. I wish this sight could last a little while, Before the mustard wildflowers paint the hills in golden style. Birds, bees, and butterflies will join the scene, Creating a symphony of colors, oh, so serene. May my heart hold onto this grand sight, A memory to cherish, a pure delight.

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Date: 3/20/2024 7:32:00 AM
so pretty
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Date: 3/17/2024 9:29:00 PM
A mesmerizing scene of beauty -- the field of poppy flowers! This sight and the memories they evoke are heavenly. Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem.... dear Jay!
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Date: 3/17/2024 11:00:00 AM
Enchanting poem, Jay, with splendid imagery. A pure delight to read--nature's beauty blended with emotions.
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Date: 3/15/2024 10:50:00 PM
I love your spring poem about Poppies, Jay. It was an exciting trip to read of the vibrant colors and beautiful landscape you experienced in this poem. The imagery was exquisite, my friend. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with nus through your poetry. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Date: 3/15/2024 4:37:00 AM
Like the last line in your poem Jay your poem is also pure delight! Bright, happy and uplifting! I loved it….DEBX
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