Spring Opens Her Eyes

As spring opens her sweet petal eyes, and the sun moves closer in our sky
I feel excitement in my heart, the increased speed, the extra spark
I witness the new tender growth, I breath in that sweet new note
I touch the skin on my aging face, I wonder if you do the same
Time has delivered the new season here, death, she will never fear
I  hold on tightly to the past, please come soon,  my time will pass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 28, 2016 at 9:32 AM
naomi webb, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 7, 2016 at 6:28 PM
NAOMI, enjoyed reading your poem. Love **SKAT**
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September 13, 2010 at 6:13 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Naomi. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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