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Spring of Substance

SPRING OF SUBSTANCE Adorable word drawing a rainbow of substance-- SPRING Benumb snow-white cloak that drapes the earth, charmed by strips of golden spotlight above blue skies delicate cloak now being peeled to show emeralds of nature: daring to model life Footsteps ready to walk on warm green grassy ground guided by cuckoo, jug-jug, pu-we to chiff chaffs hummed in chorus by swifts, mistrels and humble bees Idyllic scents of daffodils and scilla swirls on mid-air... Joyful Squirrels springing on loops of woods and rocks kindles energy burst after their winter sleep. Lodging everywhere the rising beauty of butterflies Miles and miles you will see valleys and hills smile. Nightingales: diva among birds share their lullabies. Ox huge and strong that home flies now in the stall lies; Painting bright is the seabird colony of puffins, shags and gulls quieting your despair and muse for a stare. Running cluster in the woodlands are bluebells, seen enough, be a phenologist if you like! taking notes when and where your first sight: unfolding flowers, frogs, spawns and others. Viral is the fun that leaps high during season of spring. Wildlife a phenomenal broadway to the eyes! Xanthic warm light will keep all acts alive yielding an amazing breathing ride to anyone. Zoom spring and delight in its zaftig view! _____________________________________________________________ TERMS: --xanthic--yellow or yellowish --zaftig--having full view or rounded figure ©O. E. Guillermo 10:12pm, February 25, 2015 Sponsor Shadow Hamilton Contest Name Abecedarian Placed 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/2/2015 1:06:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write dear Olive,, great words here, really loved to read !
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/12/2015 7:49:00 AM
thanks much Dr. Upma.. :)!
Date: 3/1/2015 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations Olive on your fine win with this wonderful Abecedarian Spring poem. The more I read it, the greater it becomes, mega hugs for you, James xx
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Date: 3/12/2015 7:48:00 AM
thanks much James.. :)!
Date: 2/28/2015 8:18:00 AM
Your poem is as beautiful as you! Nicely done! ;) Hugsxxx
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Date: 3/12/2015 7:47:00 AM
thanks much Cassie... :)!
Date: 2/28/2015 12:57:00 AM
Your's is an original and unique beauty Olive! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/12/2015 7:43:00 AM
thanks much COnnie.. :)! I appreciate your comments as always.. :)!
Date: 2/27/2015 11:25:00 PM
Beautifully crafted. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/12/2015 7:41:00 AM
thanks much Joyce.. :)! God bless you always... :)!
Date: 2/27/2015 11:19:00 PM
sweet win. SKAT
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/5/2015 4:07:00 AM
thanks much Skat.. :)!
Date: 2/27/2015 2:26:00 PM
You have me nearly dying for spring and the vision of my tulips, paper whites and roses...this was absolutely beautiful.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/5/2015 4:02:00 AM
thanks much M.L. .. I love spring.. :)!
Date: 2/27/2015 2:07:00 PM
The ABC’s have danced the spring dance and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats …Sara
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Date: 3/5/2015 3:57:00 AM
thanks much Sara.. :)! God bless!
Date: 2/27/2015 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations...knew it would be a winner! Perhaps a treat to the fun park would be adequate:) hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 7:46:00 AM
weeeeee a cup of coffee and a cake is fine Paul.. :) we have lots of things to catch up.. :D!
Date: 2/27/2015 11:28:00 AM
Hi Olive, a big congratulations to you for your nice win for your lovely poem about Spring! Hugs, Sandra
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 7:43:00 AM
hugs back Sandra.. :) thanks for stopping by!
Date: 2/27/2015 6:45:00 AM
Olive congrats on your 3rd place a good example hugs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/3/2015 7:34:00 AM
thanks much Shadow.. :)!
Date: 2/27/2015 6:26:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/3/2015 7:29:00 AM
thanks much.. :)
Date: 2/26/2015 11:15:00 PM
You chose such SPRING like words, which makes it resonate even more profoundly with the theme. Wonderful job for the contest, sweetie.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/27/2015 5:05:00 AM
thank you Andie.. :) pleasaant to read your comments always.. :)!
Date: 2/26/2015 1:39:00 PM
Spring poetry taken to a new level Olive. Beautifully described through your words, and every line is a delight to read. Love some of the words you've used, top marks girl, and deservedly so - James :) :)
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Date: 2/27/2015 5:04:00 AM
thanks much James.. :) I hope the judge will think that way.. :) but I so love the things that happens in spring.. :) always my fave.. and also the philosophical meaning of it.. wow!!!
Date: 2/26/2015 3:24:00 AM
- A beautiful poem Olive .... I'm really looking forward to spring ... a beautiful time where all life awakens again :) - My father's life ebbing away, I spend much time with him - not much time for reading + comments on soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/26/2015 7:10:00 PM
thank you Anne Lise.. :) its pleasant to read your visits.. I pray fo you.. hugs hugs
Date: 2/25/2015 8:20:00 PM
OK, I am ready for spring -- outstanding write dear Olive! 7
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Date: 2/26/2015 9:36:00 AM
thanks much Dear David.. :) your poems are a wow too!!! :)!
Date: 2/25/2015 1:53:00 PM
Beautiful and very descriptive. You have caught the spirit of spring extremely well Olive_eloi! while appealing to all the senses. hugs // paul
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Date: 2/26/2015 4:06:00 AM
Thanks much PAul... :) weeeee! hugs too.. :)!
Date: 2/25/2015 10:30:00 AM
Delightful Spring poem Olive - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2015 3:58:00 AM
thanks much Jan.. :)! Spring is life for me..!
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