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Spring Notes

SPRING NOTES

          I don’t ask for the meaning of the song of a bird
     or the rising of the sun on a misty morning.
There they are, and they are beautiful.

Pete Hamill


Spring ((tanager)) ((cardinal)) notes, each branch. ((robin)) ((bluebird)) ((bunting)) Tiers of colorful confetti. ((oriole)) ((grosbeak)) ((chickadee)) ((kiskadee)) ~ Virtuous Winter covered in blue ~ ((goldfinch)) ((kinglet)) ((sunbird)) ((crow)) ((thrush)) ~ Snow angels spread their wings in hatch ~ ((dove)) ((nightingale)) ((lark)) ((swallow)) Choir all the rave, dispatched, after long retreat. ((warbler)) ((wren)) ((meadowlark)) ((sparrow)) Greenery at its peak, beaks held high, majestic conductor. ((grossbeak)) ((tit)) ((jay)) ((kingfisher)) ((bullfinch)) Sweet songs of longing, life, death, in the warmth of the sun. 2/17/2021 SPRING BIRDS Sponsor: Constance La France
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Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 11:28 AM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
La France Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my Spring Birds Challenge with this creative and lovely poem, and I love the images and the quote also, well done _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Gauthier Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 6:13 AM
Love your original presentation, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Thank you, Line!
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 6:22 AM
- Skilled and creative, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Theraven Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Kim, 'There they are, and they are beautiful.' This poigniant line says it all, and says it well. Simply marvelous poem Kim. -Richard
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much, Richard!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 4:52 AM
Very innovative new style for me, seems to be in the shape of a tree, awesome imagery and scenery depicted in words. Birds and trees make spring yeahh. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Thank you!
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Hello Kim, I like the sway you created this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Thank you so much, darling lady!
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 12:10 PM
I see them all through tiers of colors, Kim. Your presentation is quite unique and original--in warmth of their sweet songs.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 3:36 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Ball Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Well Done Kim. Very cleverly worked out. Love it. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Thank you, Judy :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 8:37 AM
Very creative piece Kim, good luck in the contest. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Thank you :)
Brul Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Very creative! I love how your imagination works on this gem! Lovely!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Fowler Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Terrific and prolific Kim! GL in the contest. :) Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Thank you, Linda!
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