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SPRING NOTES I don’t ask for the meaning of the song of a bird or the rising of the sun on a misty morning. There they are, and they are beautiful. Pete Hamill
Spring ((tanager)) ((cardinal)) notes, each branch. ((robin)) ((bluebird)) ((bunting)) Tiers of colorful confetti. ((oriole)) ((grosbeak)) ((chickadee)) ((kiskadee)) ~ Virtuous Winter covered in blue ~ ((goldfinch)) ((kinglet)) ((sunbird)) ((crow)) ((thrush)) ~ Snow angels spread their wings in hatch ~ ((dove)) ((nightingale)) ((lark)) ((swallow)) Choir all the rave, dispatched, after long retreat. ((warbler)) ((wren)) ((meadowlark)) ((sparrow)) Greenery at its peak, beaks held high, majestic conductor. ((grossbeak)) ((tit)) ((jay)) ((kingfisher)) ((bullfinch)) Sweet songs of longing, life, death, in the warmth of the sun. 2/17/2021 SPRING BIRDS Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 2/28/2021 11:28:00 AM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/28/2021 8:00:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my Spring Birds Challenge with this creative and lovely poem, and I love the images and the quote also, well done _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 2/28/2021 6:13:00 AM
Love your original presentation, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 2/20/2021 5:09:00 PM
Kim, this is perfection, like all your other poetry. Fair Winds & Smooth Seas.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2021 8:29:00 PM
You are so very sweet! Thank you, Gina!
Date: 2/20/2021 6:22:00 AM
- Skilled and creative, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2021 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 2/19/2021 7:21:00 PM
Kim, 'There they are, and they are beautiful.' This poigniant line says it all, and says it well. Simply marvelous poem Kim. -Richard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2021 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Richard!
Date: 2/18/2021 4:52:00 AM
Very innovative new style for me, seems to be in the shape of a tree, awesome imagery and scenery depicted in words. Birds and trees make spring yeahh. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2021 7:02:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/17/2021 3:54:00 PM
Hello Kim, I like the sway you created this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2021 7:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, darling lady!
Date: 2/17/2021 12:10:00 PM
I see them all through tiers of colors, Kim. Your presentation is quite unique and original--in warmth of their sweet songs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2021 3:36:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 2/17/2021 10:13:00 AM
Well Done Kim. Very cleverly worked out. Love it. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2021 3:35:00 PM
Thank you, Judy :)
Date: 2/17/2021 8:37:00 AM
Very creative piece Kim, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2021 3:35:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/17/2021 8:04:00 AM
Very creative! I love how your imagination works on this gem! Lovely!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2021 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 2/17/2021 7:54:00 AM
Love the way you designed your poem into a tree, best wishes for the contest! (: - Jacob
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2021 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Jacob! :)
Date: 2/17/2021 6:52:00 AM
Terrific and prolific Kim! GL in the contest. :) Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!